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[Go to the reposted story with the title: 'I'd Like to Change My Reincarnation Subscription, Please']
Superpowers abound. Villains rule the world. A transmigrated dork that has absolutely no idea what’s going on.
Strong-armed by the Superhero Enhancement System into the thankless job of endlessly performing good deeds in a world where such actions are often met with violence, Lucas Lynn doesn't have much choice in regards to using his supposed gifts.
It’s bad enough having to pretend to be a supervillain, but how exactly does Boss System expect him to save the world with only the help of a homeless orphan, a dog that’s smarter than he is, and a yoyo?
Oh, just trick some supervillains into becoming superheroes instead? You make it sound so easy!
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Bronze tier winner in WPC #166, quote from referring editor: Comedic system, fun story.
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The first ever book I've honestly rated a five. The MC is really lovable and precious, the world he lived in was absolutely stunning and amazing, and despite being confined in his own home, we got to know a lot about our lead. You're an amazing writer, keep it up
This is bloody amazing 👏. Good story line with a unique plot and world background .so far the the books been great and added to my favourite list.👍 looking forward to that hero/villain? taking over the world or something 🙃
Oh, right. Horror/Thriller. "Gulp" An entertaining main character with a unique voice. Interesting story with a unique plot differentiating from the norm. Comedy, Action -Blood Spills Drama "Aw" More comedy And the best system ever. It's awesome, keep it coming. "Boo" - Are you scared? (Probably the scariest thing you'll read)
Nothing really critical to criticize here. Only think I'd recommend is getting rid of the [Internally]. Up to Chapter 3 I haven't seen a reason at least why it wouldn't be possible to just go with ' ' as thoughts. The story is somewhat catchy because it has it's own, funny charm. Other than that: 1. Poor Lucas 2. Even more poor lucas 3. It reminds me a bit of Erased. But instead of traveling back in time to avoid something bad that happens around him, he dies when he misses the chance to fulfill his good deed.
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Howdy! Ive been reading for a while now and I gotta say i love it so far. and I agree with what you said about our writing styles being similar. The concepts are even kind of close! And that makes me a little biased toward your writing and story as well. I honestly did have a few criticisms but after reading further you addressed them either through change or in your little author notes. I cant wait to see you excecute the potential that a world like this undeniably has. *Gets back to reading*
In general, I would say this story is top notch. The characters are well developed, it incorporates interesting twists in the basic premises for a reincarnation novel, and the author even manages to pack in details that further develop the characters and the world. The descriptions and dialogue are generally well interspersed to keep the story entertaining and that is why I rate it so highly. However, if you are impatient, the excessive detail may dissuade you from continuing before you finish even the first chapter. But that is your loss. Great story can't wait to read more in the future!
The plot tickles my imagination and the narration was vividly narrated. Fluent and astounding for my taste! This gotta be popular in the near future and the plot is unique! I like it!
Love it! World building is on par, writing and descriptions are good. Dialogue between MC and system is funny and well put together. Can’t wait to see how the story progresses.
Such wonderful work and writing! I see nothing wrong in this... wait... maybe... The poor Lucas and the abuses author is perpetuating! Just maybe...
Pretty interesting concept for sure but the synopsis could probably sense some work. Otherwise it's a perfect fun story to read so if anything I'm just nitpicking to be hnest. Great read, fun and memorable characters.
ok the cynopsis deserves the five stars for the Pauper . aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I've barely reviewed maybe 2 other novels on this site. so it does take something special for me to write one. I have to say this author is super promising. main character is a likeable dude in a screwed up world. it's also pretty funny sometimes. good humor, great character and world building and even earlier chapters are fairly well written. this is the only original novel I've read which I felt compelled to review. I came looking for gold found platinum
It's okay, but I just didn't feel like the direction of the story was very good. I dropped it at chapter 17 after the protagonist started having money fall into his lap and a side character I just didn't care about got added. So the protagonist has a system that gives him powers and resources depending on how many good deeds he's done. I found that dumping a million dollars a month on the protagonist through this system to be really boring. Because now I have to read about him spending money on random things. And also because you started the story off with the protagonist as an underdog, now you are just dropping things into his lap. Sorry, but 16 chapters of buildup just fell flat. I didn't care for the side characters either. The protagonist has no idea what he's doing, I don't feel like a disciple is a good fit. Like I don't want to hear conversations about getting the disciple clothed, showered, and sheltered. I hate idle chit chat that doesn't advance the plot and the disciple is turning into a chatter box. Finally, I think you revealed too much by telling us what the power scale is. How the final hero had achieved something like 200 points before dying. I'm already unsure about weather your power system is going to make any sense. I don't need something to compare the protagonist to at this point.
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This book is too hard to be reviewed by a mere mortal :) It has everything: humor, action, gore, and almost everything you can think of. I was looking for something to replace the fun I had watching Saitama in action. Well, now I've found it. Well done, author! 5 stars is too little for this ;)