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Re-Born

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作者: Onexal

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#Bts #mafia #romance

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AsuraMonarch

This is a blatant hate review but fuck male preg. There's also the unrealistic and blatant fact that he seems to be treated as less than human and no one gives a shit. (i skipped chaps) another thing is i don't believe you described appearances. 2nd if the parents hate the mc so much and the fact he seems to have no human rights then they could've just disowned him long ago. I could probably find more if i read the entirety but i mainly did this so it isn't blatant spam. I did provide criticism.

6yr
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Changi_v

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5yr
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KIM_TAEHYUNG_

This such a good story I really was WAITING for the last part PLEASE MAKE MORE I NEED MORE! This got so intense when you put that seokjin and my best friend were kissing like OMG AND then when I went to the restaurant with jaeho and then he leaned and WHAT I NEED MORE PLEASE KEEP MAKING FIGHTING

6yr
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Ylla_Aomee

This is a good story....but bringing up the gay thing and that too for Suga and Jimin...really sucks....and the story is stuck in ch 9....wish to read more....thank you

4yr
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blacksilverking

Good read blahblah blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah

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