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Plunged into the world of Honkai: Star Rail, a man loses everything he once had. Combative and confused, he struggles with faith and seeing those around him as real while seeking a way back home. Thrown into the story he once controlled, he now faces the consequences of every choice, real or imagined.
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God tier please don't stop this is literally the best Honkai star rail fanfiction on this sight that i ever read please don't stop writing it
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Only need to read the first chapter to know this will be absolute peak! keep cooking, author
too much drama bullsh— for my taste. but so far it's the best hsr fics I've ever read ngl. the updates schedule is a bit inconstant, but the chapter's quality and quantity is really great.
This is here? I've read this on FF and the thing I can say about this is that this is fking GREAT! The MC is not a blank slate which I like already, He also have a personality that comes with flaws, and his decision and thinking are not stiff, some decision he makes are due to his emotions he felt at the time. He also have realistic conflict within himself that are just interesting to read. The Characters are also not just some cardboard cutout of themselves, like how March is not just a Bubbly Girl, and because of how the author fleshed out the characters, we get interactions between Them and The MC. The Plot: It's still early since it's only at the early part of the battle against Cocolia (Ch. 26) but the way the author is good imo, i'm not gonna spoil of course, but the author used the plot in Belobog and added their own twist in it, and that twist is what deviated this Fanfic's plot to the Canon one, the result of it is just so different than what happened there. Overall this is a Fanfic I would surely re-read after this got finished, Of course there might be some flaws in the story, as always, but this is geniunely a good fanfic that have an interesting story
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A beautiful piece of work. Fanfiction on "Honkai: Star Rail" is rare, of all the few fanfiction this is the best. A wonderful presentation of events, the characters' relationship to each other. But the best part is the way the characters are written, their thoughts, the way they react to different situations, it's amazing. (Google translator)
While the plot is nothing new and the writting is good, i just find the MC pretty average. His whole backstory was just whatever and while it was interesting for him to take the Trailblazer's place, his overall personality and attitude is average dude. He isn't that generic but still nothing about him makes him completley unique and intriguing to read.
this is some good stuff! umu ya'll gotta read this or try it out if not... well idk but just try it out
Fantastic story. Easily the best Honkai Star Rail stories and one of the best stories I have ever read in general. I usually never drop a review, but with how great this fanfic was I just had to. Please keep updating, need more of this. 🙏🙏
★★★★☆ A Surprisingly Decent Read (Trust Me, I'm Totally Not Biased) Look, I'm going to be real with you here. The writing? It's fine. With a few years of writing experience under my belt, you won't find any grammar disasters here. Nothing that'll win a Pulitzer, but hey, you won't need eye bleach either. Character design and worldbuilding? Well... *awkward cough*. I'm basically standing on the shoulders of giants here since I'm working with an established universe. So yeah, those are solid - but I can't exactly take credit for that. It's like acing a test by copying the smart kid's homework, except legal and ethical. Now, story development? This is where I get to toot my own horn a bit (and since I'm writing this review, who's going to stop me?). This is definitely my strong suit as an author. I've got this whole plotline mapped out, the pacing's got momentum like a runaway freight train, and the story arcs? chef's kiss They actually go somewhere, imagine that! But let's talk about update stability, because oof. 3/5 stars, and I'm being generous to myself here. These chapters are thicc, and between real-life responsibilities and my apparent inability to write anything shorter than a novella per update, we're looking at anywhere from a week (when the stars align) to a month (when life decides to play whack-a-mole with my writing schedule). The verdict: This is my first rodeo in terms of actually putting my work out there, and you know what? I'm just proud I finally did it instead of letting it gather dust in my "maybe someday" folder. It's like jumping into a pool - sure, maybe I belly-flopped, but at least I'm swimming!