/ Fantasy / Quick Transmigration: The Day I Blew Up My Housemate
摘要
On his 21st birthday, Hao Junli's housemate's surprise birthday cake surprised him into an early grave. With his soul scattered across multitudes of time and planes, Feng Mian resigned herself to contract with System 555 in order to bring him back to life.
World X Hao Junli: Has shrunk into a chibi prince
Feng Mian: Don't worry housemate! This sister will teach you the ways of the world!
World XX Hao Junli: A psychopath with a personality disorder
Feng Mian: ... Whatever. Is the sidekick position free?
World XXX Hao Junli: Levelled up to become a high ranking ghost
Feng Mian: ... I'm deathly scared of ghosts ba...
System 555: Didn't you say you used to be the school bully's second in command?
Feng Mian: Yes, the second ah. The leader position used to be occupied by Hao Junli
System 555: ........
After a dozen of worlds retrieving souls and granting an ex-housemate wishes...
Hao Junli: This world I want to get married.
Feng Mian: .....
System 555: .....
Feng Mian: Old Five you go prepare the dowry, I'll go kidnap the bride!
ARCS:
Arc 1: Servant of the Cold Palace [COMPLETED]
Arc 2: CEO with a Tintin [COMPLETED]
Arc 3: Apocalyptic Experiment 119 [ONGOING]
Arc 4: The Psychopath and His Sidekick
Arc 5: Midnight Cruise with a Flirting Ghost
Arc 6: The Grandmaster’s Reborn Devilish Pupil
Arc 7: The School Flower is a Gangster
Arc 8: Demonization of the Four Realm’s Goddess
Arc 9: Fourth-Tier Actor Has a Rich Sugar Mommy
Arc 10: Oh Little Mermaid, What Big Teeth You Have!
Arc 11: Counterattack of the Music Prodigy
Arc 12: Bitten by a Rogue Vampire
Arc 13: The General’s Beloved Pet
Arc 14: The Virtual NPC is a Bias Face-Con
Arc 15: Taking Over a Planet to Kidnap the Commander-in-Chief
Arc 16: The Fifth Consort is a Pyromaniac
Arc 17: The Tables Have Turned, Introducing the Gucci Branded Task Taker
Extras
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The cover is commissioned and belongs to me. A special thanks to rowyourboat from ARTSTREET who illustrated this amazing cover.
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I'll quick talk about aspects of the book: Strength: - Highly readable grammar - Vivid imagery - Reasonable chapter length - Seemingly well sorted out plot - Dialogues (you can potentially hear the characters speaking in your head) Weakness: - As far as none, however the names were hard af for me to memorize.
I read the story's first three chapters and I admit that it is good with such an excellent detail of the background, expression, tone and everything. Five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The story starts off quickly. Here I was thinking about what will happen and suddenly I am at the hospital. The characters are strong and well-written. What interests me more is how many words will they hop. The chapters so far are fun to read. And I liked the small explanation you gave below the chapter 2. Helped a lot to understand. And the cover is beautiful. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to reading more chapters.!! <3 <3
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Nice story! It sounds interresting as well. And there’s the translation for The people who doenst know some words which helps a lot to understand the story. The writing quality is good too. Not to many errors. Keep it up!👏
Awesome work !! Loved the progression of the story. Descriptions are perfect and characters are well set. loved it. Eagerly waiting for next chapters. keep up the work 😇😇
Woah !! Noble but ruthless palace .Good background building. .I like it .Haha the system is funny. Keep up with the good work author .This book has good potential .Update more chapters , looking forward to it .
Okay here are my honest thoughts, I do really like the concept of you using the system in this novel. Most system novels usually love to give a lot of detail about stats that taking over most of the line, but this one is different. The system explanation is pretty short, but yet informative and makes the flow of the story smoother. I also like the character interaction in this novel, it feels like a real human and funny at the same time. The character itself is not irritating and enjoyable to read. The writing itself is quite good especially in how the author describes the happening and atmosphere. It is well detailed and structured at the same time. As for the world building, but I believe the author will expand more other than from the MC sides. However, I do really like the concept of the author using Eastern culture, more specifically Chinese culture which is quite fascinating. The author has also done a splendid job of showing the culture through the character's appearance other things related to the culture. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel, and thank you. I truly believe this novel has good potential and I am looking forward to it. Keep up the good work!!
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Delightful work. this novel is appreciative. keep it up, author! Work hard to achieve your goal. 👍👍👍 the plotting is very admirable. 🌱🌱
Such a fun read, fIlled with laugh out loud moments. Love the dialogue between the protagonist and system 555 🤣 Looking forward to more updates!
It was fun to read. I personally likes how the author describes the environment. The writing was excellent and the vocabulary was good and perfect in the situations. Though I was confused in some parts, the plot was well articulated and does keep the readers on hook.
Clicked on the novel because the cover was beautiful and the tittle was intriguing. Stayed bcs of the writing quality 💪💪 Keep it up writer-nim! 🥰 Excited to see what's going to happen next
I really like your novel style, everything about the novel from plot to every person is well built , and eventhough it have slow pacing, but the satrting is very good, really looking forward to the novel
I gotta say, this is written gracefully. You can feel the hard work here. His vocabulary is great as well, really compliments the writing style. The story is good of course. The updates are pretty stable too, the standard. I love how he vividly displays the world around the characters. Good going fellow author!
Writing quality amazing 😍 updating stability seems to be going well The story is intriguing in w unique way But the writing skills are amazing. Story development Also unique
Writing Quality: Awesome Stability of Updates: Pretty stable Story Development: Great Character Design: Strong and well-built characters World Background: Very interesting
This is story is definitely an explosion of surprises. I am not a fan of system stories but this makes me want to read more of it. How could you not drive to read when the synopsis it self is kicks you to dive in? Great job author!
It's a dramatic opening with a well-outlined plotline story. It has a unique concept to retrieve lost souls. I can see future it has multiple world setting. A good read so far.
Overall the book is an interesting one to read and the writer has done a good job. However, there is a "but". Think the novel title is too long, The title can just be "The day I blew up my housemate", To me i believe that is captivating enough. Also, the book cover is poor. I strongly believe the author can get a befitting one. This is what i think and the author may choose to ignore. Aside this, the author has really done a good job.
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Hello everyone, I'm the author of this book. Let me just start off by shamelessly giving myself a 5-star rating. There! This is the first novel that I have published and also the first romance/comedy themed work I have ever done. It is very near and dear to me. Feng Mian and Hao Junli are the babies I've raised from my very own hands, and although they're not the most well-behaved, they will always and forever be my children. So I do hope that you'll love them as much as I do. I don't admit that the writing is seamless or faultless, but I will say that I intend to improve with every chapter. Anyway... The reason I'm posting a comment is to give you guys a heads up on what the future arcs will hold. This story is still a work in progress so expect the list to be revised sooner or later. ARC LIST: Arc 1: Servant of the Cold Palace Arc 2: CEO with a Tintin Arc 3: Apocalyptic Experiment 119 Arc 4: The Psychopath and His Sidekick Arc 5: Midnight Cruise with a Flirting Ghost Arc 6: The Grandmaster’s Reborn Devilish Pupil Arc 7: The School Flower is a Gangster Arc 8: Demonization of the Four Realm’s Goddess Arc 9: Fourth-Tier Actor Has a Rich Sugar Mommy Arc 10: Oh Little Mermaid, What Big Teeth You Have! Arc 11: Counterattack of the Music Prodigy Arc 12: Bitten by a Rogue Vampire Arc 13: The General’s Beloved Pet Arc 14: The Virtual NPC is a Bias Face-Con Arc 15: Taking Over a Planet to Kidnap the Commander-in-Chief Arc 16: The Fifth Consort is a Pyromaniac Arc 17: The Tables Have Turned, Introducing the Gucci Branded Task Taker Extras
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