King_Noran

King_Noran

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Just a filipino guy who writes for fun, started to write last year and loved it ever since. I'm still not good but I hope you teach me the ropes along the way. Let's hang out! Discord: Ken Ken#2675

2021-04-09 加入 Global
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King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Posted

Shameless review by your boy King Noran here. So, this is a story I've been wanting to work on for a while now. I really like supernatural and fantasy stuff (the tragedy and dark fantasy part is nothing, I just find them more interesting and... realistic? Whatever). I will not abandon my other novel [Adam: The Vagabond]. I'll just repeat it here, I will be splitting time.

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Posted

The words are poetic and lovely as a Shakespeare original. There's this hint of longing as you read the characters and the events, plus the subtle but important details make the story beautiful and seamless. Would recommend, definitely worth a try.

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Replied to Andry_Reyes

thanks for reading my stuff mate. my stomach's not doing well so forgive me for not updating a chapter

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Posted

Okay, first the good points. Images are vivid because of the clear and detailed narrative. The story is somewhat interesting, and author is playful with words. However, the bad points lie in the synopsis. The author was 'lazy', which is not a word you want to use since it's an X for most, a turn off. There's also stuff like the narrative breaking the fourth wall on the first chapter, not a fan. Well, you might think that its a bad novel, its not. Its good actually, and the points I pointed out are rather minor. Good work author!

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Posted

It's a fun to read book with a lot of good humor. There's... unique, elements at play like a god, well, just read it i cant explain hahaha. Its a good book.

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Replied to Andry_Reyes

fixed, brother.

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Replied to Clone_v2

{This bracket} for onomatopoeia is now minimalized and in the later chapters, completely vanished. tnx for the insight!

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Replied to Clone_v2

trying to fix it now. tnx!

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Replied to Clone_v2

the [brackets like this] actually is conversation with the nymph, and (brackets like this are Adam's reply to them.) I have decided to use 'Parenthesis' for the other's thoughts or simply narrate theirs but yeah I'm keeping them because it will get even more confusing without them (for me, I think).

King_Noran
King_Noran
3 years ago
Replied to Clone_v2

yeah, it was supposed to be "what a weird lady." fixed it. thanks for the insight

  • Adam: The Vagabond original

    Adam: The Vagabond

    Fantasy ADVENTURE MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS TRAGEDY

    4.64

    [Author's Note: I will be posting this on royalroad.com] As an adopted child, Adam was different from his siblings. Despite this, he wasn't isolated and his foster parents treated him no differently than they would with their own child. It was a warm and loving family. A family destroyed by a mysterious explosion that decimated their entire town. Thankfully, he and his 'twin sister' survived the tragedy. However, at sunrise she vanished. Where did she go? No, the question is not right for she would never leave his side. Who took her? And where is she? Bearing the guilt and sorrow of losing her, he roams Azaquell in search of what he has lost. ____________________________ The art in the book cover is not mine, but belongs to "RainNoir", an artist who makes aesthetic art. I actually love his style for, well, obvious reasons I mean just look at it. Adam's appearance is actually inspired by Chrollo Lucilfer (with some of my own calibrations), a character in HxH and Mister RainNoir here drew him beautifully. To the creator, if you don't like me using this art please contact me on discord (Ken Ken#2675) so I can take it down.

    13 Chs 48 收藏

  • The Smiles We Make In Spite Of The Rain original

    The Smiles We Make In Spite Of The Rain

    Fantasy ACTION MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS TRAGEDY

    The world has fallen. Three children, John, Ember, and Josh lives in an underground shelter along with 17 other children. Their guardians, Father and Mom, train them for The Outside. However, there's something wrong with the shelter- No, something's wrong with everything.

    3 Chs 1 收藏

  • Rain: K original

    Rain: K

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MYSTERY TRAGEDY SEINEN

    A boy who has no recollection of his past whatsoever finds himself waking up in an unknown location, unable to move. "Where is this place?" "Who am I?" It didn't take long before he started encountering bizarre creatures and people. Eventually, he realizes that this world is not the world he previously knew. A world dominated by forces that doesn't follow his usual common sense with strange new elements such as magic replacing it. How will he live in a world where all things seems to go against his favors? [AUTHOR'S NOTE: Remastered the entire thing because I didn't like the writing and the fast progress of the story] When reading: "Quotation marks are for dialogues" **Double Asterisks mean important to remember words, phrases, etc.** 'Apostrophes are either for flashbacks or emphasis' (Parenthesized words are for side comments) {Brackets are for onomatopoeia and sometimes, feelings and detailed actions}

    6 Chs 4 收藏

  • Blood and Metal! (PAUSED) original

    Blood and Metal! (PAUSED)

    Sci-fi ACTION SCARY

    Humans have been at the top of the food chain for thousands of years, abusing the environment, wasting resources, laying waste to the entire world. Global warming, a phenomenon caused by human waste. Because of this, countless of species are going extinct and the glaciers of the antarctic are starting to melt. Nature has had enough. It brings out it's best weapon yet, and it's clad in full metal! The Twister Virus is a virus that's been rumored to produce Twisters, a man-eating human. Information about it have spread through a website in the net made by James Dober, the one who claims the virus has spread and that it's real. However, his websites and articles were flagged for spreading false data. Still, constant updates and some footages were also presented as evidence for the matter, and as a result, started an internet war. More than half of the world believes that the virus is real, most particularly Philippines (where the story is set). Joseph Brylle, a young, care-free high-schooler thinks the entire thing is just a "well though-out fiction" and found it interesting, so he read and took notes of all the James Dober articles and videos for the sole reason of 'it would make a good fanfic'. One day, on a shitty day, he accidentally comes across a twister (a person infected by the virus) and got bitten by it, successfully infecting him. Will he live the rest of his life as a twister? Or will he retain his sanity? Eitherway, he needs to choose a side very soon...

    3 Chs 1 收藏