摘要
Pokemon i will catch you, all of you legendary will be mine. I will create team the strongest pokemon.
End died in accident, he play game pokemon in home and struck with bolt of thunder from sky, he reincarnate and give system from god.
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寫檢討
Writer has poor grammar which can make reading difficult. Story is somewhat fast paced and hazy on a few details but it has potential. If author spent more time i would read it in the future.
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This novel is quite good the author is new to writing there's a lot of potential in this and hope the author start using proper grammar and sentences or get someone to do it it will increase the quality of the chapters.
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Pretty good so far keep it up I hope the next battle will be most epic with ho-ho and darkri fighting that strange pokemon. Like whos that pokemon? will bill keep his promise or not? will the pokemon join or not? what will happen?
揭示劇透
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏