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A Pokemon Self Insert story. So there I was enjoying myself at a bar about to try my luck at picking up a pretty girl and then bam! I'm on Route 1, short as shit and somehow twelve again. Oh well, at the very least I can get that Charizard I always dreamed of.
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I had the opportunity to read this in another site, I'm glad to see it here too. I know firsthand this will be quite fun, so I look forward to it! Specially with the try-hard birds incoming.
10/10 would nut again. No BS here. No idiot balls. Just pure power-leveling and "plot" ;). Give it a try and you'll enjoy it. It's a story about a character who knows a lot about Pokemon and knows how to use and train them.
dont drop it continue author just needs a push then it'll be on the rankings ...............................................................
The story is honestly great. However i was disappointed to find out that although this story says 29 chapters those 29 chapters are actually earlier in the story then 14 chapters i read on fanfiction. These are just cut up versions of those. Im not sure if it was the Authors old account and hes reposting them here or if someone copied the Authors work and just put it up on Fanfiction but either way i was disappointed to see no actual new chapter and instead find out this story is falling behind which means ill have to wait even more time for an actually New chapter.
dude when will you update this and other pokefics....can't wait for more smugness with plot for self insert.....can't read your other stories thought because don't know about those......maybe you could write marvel
The only Pokemon fanfic I'll read nowadays simply because I can see the future harem containing the best waifus of the franchise imo and the fact that the MC is actually properly giving love to all his Pokemon no matter how many he has while also using proper reasonable training methods, meaning he's using his head properly most of the time. Plus even though all his Pokemon are getting powered up quickly, he himself actually gets stronger too of a somewhat reasonable extent while also having the balls to punch Pokemon if it comes to it.
One of the best pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
finally decided to read this Novel when you finally changed the previous cover photo.... It was disgusting in my opinion, and also I waited years for it.
Story is good in a way… You know your stuff but their is too much inner thoughts and continuous exposition being spilled…
so, you here have a masterpiece of epic proportions... I'm not shi**** the mc will give a punch in a Dragonite for you... come and see pokemon like none before
Great read, you your writing style makes me think your having a good laugh while doing it. keep up the good work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Idk what you plan for this story like whether your going to make him travel like ash or after winning the Pokémon league (If he does) just settle down and wait to die, maybe have a family. But what I personally want to happen and it goes with the mc's personality is to go around the world just to have fun and train more Pokémon. I really want you to keep the mc a manlet too because its a real contrast to the really tall mc from this site and I personally would like the change, maybe a little taller like misty's height but other than that I would like him short, and I have a valid reason why, because of the gravity training it stunted his growth. About the smut with his young age, mc doesn't seem to mind the young as long as there hot like with misty being 13 but mc still checking her out and wanting to smash. So, why should we care? Besides he's mentally a adult and the kids seem more mature there so what's the harm? But in the end of the day this is just my opinion. I like your story so keep it up please and good luck.
Dear story, it's perfect, I read until the last chapter, I'm having a lot of fun, so many events that will shake the structures, so many interactions, I hope you continue with the story until the end without abandoning it.
Man, I really hope this fic isn’t dead. I‘Ve read so many Pokémon stories on FF.net that I ran out of the readable ones and had to switch to this app to find new ones to read. By “readable ones”, I mean ones that: (A) Are in English because I’m American and English is the only language I know (so don’t flame me by thinking I’m saying English is the only language allowed because I’m not saying that And (B) Don’t have a egregious amount of grammer or spelling mistakes. I can look past the occasional mistake because I understand that English isn’t every author’s first language but if it’s like every other sentence, it’s too distracting to me and I just stop reading. It’s probably not hyperbole to say I‘ve read something like over 100+ individual fics with most likely something along the lines of WELL over 10 million total words I’ve read at this point (combined from both platforms). All that is to say, this fic is one of the best ones I’ve read on either platform. Great characters, well thought out story line, very little grammer/spelling mistakes, etc. It’s now been 4 months since the last update and I believe the author is updating his other fics instead but I really hope they haven’t dropped this fic because it’s an awesome masterpiece so far! I really, REALLY hope you continue with it because this truely is an amazing work!
Amazing.. Just amazing. Best pokemon fic I ever read and absolutely fantastic. It was a little annoying in the middle where every other line was filled with curse and ruffian of a protagonist our mc became, an annoying pervert but after Hilda left the things went uphill.
idk about quality of this ff ,but I have never seen a ff more entertaining and iIwas genuinely surprised at how good this ff was and the fact that the author is Scottish makes it a . million times better like the comedy of the mc the determination the emotions ,the conversations the reactions everything is absolutely perfect I've never seen anything this "smooth" pls continue this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I just feel disappointed cause how can I read anything as good as this ever, 1 star But for real it is so insanely beautiful that I can’t describe it better, it is an ethereal feeling to read this and the fact that when writing this it is still being updated is a blessing from arceus (IT IS PRONOUNCED ARE-SEA-US) above Thank you for blessing me with such a beautiful piece of art 🙏 (This is deserving of the glazing I’m giving it)
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