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BarryAnime

This guy has made 2 out of the top 5 webnovels I've read. The best thing about it is the absurd humor and imagining a 12 year old prodigy smacking everyone. Good taste, but I wish he'd hurry and beat the rest of the gym leaders, but I think it's only been 3 months in world. The yu gi oh isekai is good too, but this one is better.

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Grayfoxmg1

I love all of your stories. They are all fun and not stupidly edgey like other fanfics. Which is important to me, because I read to be entertained not depressed.

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Mugenryuu

it may be short on chapters but it's one of the best Pokemon fanfic I've ever read, keep up the good work author!..................................................................................................................

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StarlightMagallan

10 out of 10 Peak Fiction Well cooked ✍️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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JChristian

hello jord why did you blocked me on Patreon

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JChristian

please update more on this story author I really love this story

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Maverix74

I just caught up last night. i really enjoy the world building of this story. It feels full and the pokemon are all very well written. Blissey is best girl!!

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MKKcalb

Dear story, it's perfect, I read until the last chapter, I'm having a lot of fun, so many events that will shake the structures, so many interactions, I hope you continue with the story until the end without abandoning it.

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1EI1
LV 4 Badge

This is my first comment but I just had to comment on this bc it’s probably the best or 2nd best fanfic I have read, the smut part is kinda weird but it’s only like 4 chapters so it’s fine

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Alex_Helton

more please. seriously this is good. Also please let him get a baby Arcticuno

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gator101gator

Man, I really hope this fic isn’t dead. I‘Ve read so many Pokémon stories on FF.net that I ran out of the readable ones and had to switch to this app to find new ones to read. By “readable ones”, I mean ones that: (A) Are in English because I’m American and English is the only language I know (so don’t flame me by thinking I’m saying English is the only language allowed because I’m not saying that And (B) Don’t have a egregious amount of grammer or spelling mistakes. I can look past the occasional mistake because I understand that English isn’t every author’s first language but if it’s like every other sentence, it’s too distracting to me and I just stop reading. It’s probably not hyperbole to say I‘ve read something like over 100+ individual fics with most likely something along the lines of WELL over 10 million total words I’ve read at this point (combined from both platforms). All that is to say, this fic is one of the best ones I’ve read on either platform. Great characters, well thought out story line, very little grammer/spelling mistakes, etc. It’s now been 4 months since the last update and I believe the author is updating his other fics instead but I really hope they haven’t dropped this fic because it’s an awesome masterpiece so far! I really, REALLY hope you continue with it because this truely is an amazing work!

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sorenleonidas93

This is a good story. I hope you can still continues it.[img=update]

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Luxario0

Gooooooooooooood👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.............................................. ..................................................

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Justin_Lawyer_6808

Good stuff and I hope you get more chapters soon cause I really want more…

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IceMonarch

Amazing.. Just amazing. Best pokemon fic I ever read and absolutely fantastic. It was a little annoying in the middle where every other line was filled with curse and ruffian of a protagonist our mc became, an annoying pervert but after Hilda left the things went uphill.

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Sasa_Ihab

idk about quality of this ff ,but I have never seen a ff more entertaining and iIwas genuinely surprised at how good this ff was and the fact that the author is Scottish makes it a . million times better like the comedy of the mc the determination the emotions ,the conversations the reactions everything is absolutely perfect I've never seen anything this "smooth" pls continue this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Sparox

I just feel disappointed cause how can I read anything as good as this ever, 1 star But for real it is so insanely beautiful that I can’t describe it better, it is an ethereal feeling to read this and the fact that when writing this it is still being updated is a blessing from arceus (IT IS PRONOUNCED ARE-SEA-US) above Thank you for blessing me with such a beautiful piece of art 🙏 (This is deserving of the glazing I’m giving it)

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saikat_69

The best pokemon fanfic i have ever read bro keep it up i want to see the end of the story not in rush though 👍👍👍. And good thing you pick up the story again

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JinVenture

I kinda forgot what happened on this store.oh well.Time to reread it again!

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Amannensen

best pokemon fanfic ever should try[img=update]

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Medguy

This is the best Pokemon fanfiction I have read to this date. I'd wish there were more chapters to read or at least an increase regarding the upload of future chapters

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okhuysen_ruiz

Una de las mejores historias de Pokémon que he leído jajajaja, las batalla contra Lance me hizo gritar de emoción y sinceramente ya quiero el siguiente cap.

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Bomberman

it's good, what else can i say..........

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Kris_Tylers_1273

This the best Pkmn Fanfic on Webnovel, 🤔Actually scratch that, It's the best amongst all Pokemon books I've read!Even after waiting for a Year, I couldn't replace the feeling of excitement and I can say that I'm the Author's helpful minion

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mM_Mm
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How many chapter ahead is it on Patreon?

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Yuvie1010

On of the best Pokemon fics. 10/10.

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gaurav_Kumar_1424

For all the immature and horniness of Mc the story itself is quite good. Don't think too much and just roll with it

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VirginYoungMaster

finally decided to read this Novel when you finally changed the previous cover photo.... It was disgusting in my opinion, and also I waited years for it.

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True_Vanity

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BarryAnime

This guy has made 2 out of the top 5 webnovels I've read. The best thing about it is the absurd humor and imagining a 12 year old prodigy smacking everyone. Good taste, but I wish he'd hurry and beat the rest of the gym leaders, but I think it's only been 3 months in world. The yu gi oh isekai is good too, but this one is better.

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Grayfoxmg1

I love all of your stories. They are all fun and not stupidly edgey like other fanfics. Which is important to me, because I read to be entertained not depressed.

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Mugenryuu

it may be short on chapters but it's one of the best Pokemon fanfic I've ever read, keep up the good work author!..................................................................................................................

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StarlightMagallan

10 out of 10 Peak Fiction Well cooked ✍️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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JChristian

hello jord why did you blocked me on Patreon

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JChristian

please update more on this story author I really love this story

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Maverix74

I just caught up last night. i really enjoy the world building of this story. It feels full and the pokemon are all very well written. Blissey is best girl!!

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MKKcalb

Dear story, it's perfect, I read until the last chapter, I'm having a lot of fun, so many events that will shake the structures, so many interactions, I hope you continue with the story until the end without abandoning it.

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LV 4 Badge

This is my first comment but I just had to comment on this bc it’s probably the best or 2nd best fanfic I have read, the smut part is kinda weird but it’s only like 4 chapters so it’s fine

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Alex_Helton

more please. seriously this is good. Also please let him get a baby Arcticuno

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gator101gator

Man, I really hope this fic isn’t dead. I‘Ve read so many Pokémon stories on FF.net that I ran out of the readable ones and had to switch to this app to find new ones to read. By “readable ones”, I mean ones that: (A) Are in English because I’m American and English is the only language I know (so don’t flame me by thinking I’m saying English is the only language allowed because I’m not saying that And (B) Don’t have a egregious amount of grammer or spelling mistakes. I can look past the occasional mistake because I understand that English isn’t every author’s first language but if it’s like every other sentence, it’s too distracting to me and I just stop reading. It’s probably not hyperbole to say I‘ve read something like over 100+ individual fics with most likely something along the lines of WELL over 10 million total words I’ve read at this point (combined from both platforms). All that is to say, this fic is one of the best ones I’ve read on either platform. Great characters, well thought out story line, very little grammer/spelling mistakes, etc. It’s now been 4 months since the last update and I believe the author is updating his other fics instead but I really hope they haven’t dropped this fic because it’s an awesome masterpiece so far! I really, REALLY hope you continue with it because this truely is an amazing work!

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sorenleonidas93

This is a good story. I hope you can still continues it.[img=update]

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Luxario0

Gooooooooooooood👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁.............................................. ..................................................

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Justin_Lawyer_6808

Good stuff and I hope you get more chapters soon cause I really want more…

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IceMonarch

Amazing.. Just amazing. Best pokemon fic I ever read and absolutely fantastic. It was a little annoying in the middle where every other line was filled with curse and ruffian of a protagonist our mc became, an annoying pervert but after Hilda left the things went uphill.

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Sasa_Ihab

idk about quality of this ff ,but I have never seen a ff more entertaining and iIwas genuinely surprised at how good this ff was and the fact that the author is Scottish makes it a . million times better like the comedy of the mc the determination the emotions ,the conversations the reactions everything is absolutely perfect I've never seen anything this "smooth" pls continue this [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Sparox

I just feel disappointed cause how can I read anything as good as this ever, 1 star But for real it is so insanely beautiful that I can’t describe it better, it is an ethereal feeling to read this and the fact that when writing this it is still being updated is a blessing from arceus (IT IS PRONOUNCED ARE-SEA-US) above Thank you for blessing me with such a beautiful piece of art 🙏 (This is deserving of the glazing I’m giving it)

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saikat_69

The best pokemon fanfic i have ever read bro keep it up i want to see the end of the story not in rush though 👍👍👍. And good thing you pick up the story again

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JinVenture

I kinda forgot what happened on this store.oh well.Time to reread it again!

1yr
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Amannensen

best pokemon fanfic ever should try[img=update]

1yr
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Medguy

This is the best Pokemon fanfiction I have read to this date. I'd wish there were more chapters to read or at least an increase regarding the upload of future chapters

1yr
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okhuysen_ruiz

Una de las mejores historias de Pokémon que he leído jajajaja, las batalla contra Lance me hizo gritar de emoción y sinceramente ya quiero el siguiente cap.

1yr
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Bomberman

it's good, what else can i say..........

1yr
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Kris_Tylers_1273

This the best Pkmn Fanfic on Webnovel, 🤔Actually scratch that, It's the best amongst all Pokemon books I've read!Even after waiting for a Year, I couldn't replace the feeling of excitement and I can say that I'm the Author's helpful minion

1yr
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mM_Mm
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How many chapter ahead is it on Patreon?

1yr
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Yuvie1010

On of the best Pokemon fics. 10/10.

1yr
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gaurav_Kumar_1424

For all the immature and horniness of Mc the story itself is quite good. Don't think too much and just roll with it

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VirginYoungMaster

finally decided to read this Novel when you finally changed the previous cover photo.... It was disgusting in my opinion, and also I waited years for it.

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