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摘要
He played Pokemon and died on train.
now he good system same like emulator.
he got cheat from quest and he buy cheat.
he got cheat. he is cheat himself.
Follow him in this story, and look how he will change the whole story to his need.
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It is very bad writing style is premature and we don't get any interest in reading next chapter's overall a bad novel Cxucici k u,uf if I j hi oh if yxgcig I oh come c ii ucci I uzzi kB I
No. Read two chapters, first chapter is total ****, grammar is horrible, story doesn’t make much sense, not much excitement. Second chapter, read half of it, “Fuck this **** I’m not reading this boring crap anymore!” My face throughout this entire time reading this novel I see like Tanjiro looking at Zenitsu like he is a thing or something... all in all? Quite bad. Still gotta commend the author for having the courage to write a novel tho right?
I like what you had written so far. Can't wait for more to come and see where you take the story! Your writing quality is fair and good to read. What you are writing is understandable and clear. So far you are concise and have a clear point. I am looking forward on how you will in cooperate the chest system and as well what pokemon your main character volt will aquire. Continue on writing your story and I be looking forward in reading what's to come!!!
I think if u kept on updating this story it would get quite big and i hope u come back to it one day cos i wanna know that mystery pokemon on his team
Loved it hope you update more in the future and keep up the good work have a nice day!
Not a good story. Im not against pokemon school but merging of two worlds and spirits....for god sakes come on. Novel gets dropped after just 25chapters and chapters are small and story hasn't even properly started.
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Does grammar not even exost to you? I would suggest either getting an editor or learning english before trying to write an english novel again
Boring book, written by a small-minded, simple man for small-minded simple men. Very shallow and a waste of time. No more words needed. Sjehehdjdndjidkekekfjf.Kshdhdjdudjdibdudbdhdhduh