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Phantasm - Boku No Hero Academia Fanfic

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BNHA Shouto Todoroki x Reader

"You know that I will always be with you, right? Shoto... So please, don't forget me. "


This is the story of Shouto Todoroki, who's been waiting for his childhood friend to come back, and the story of (Y/n) (L/n), who disappeared one day.


Genre: Mystery, Fan fiction, Fantasy, Romance

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HaruAzuna

This is actually really good. I like how you add in the reader's own trait points so they know when they can put themselves into the story. It helps me imagine myself better in the story. I also like that entire storyline in general. I've seen a lot of Bakugou x Reader and Izuku x Reader, but not any Shoto x Reader. It's refreshing. A nice change of pace. Your grammar is fine, there are just a few mistakes when it comes to scene description. It's not even a big deal. You just called Shoto her twice and it was involving Fuyumi so it's understandable. This is really good. Please continue.

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