摘要
Amalia, the Former Interstellar Mercenary died on mission. She was transmigrated into Urban Cultivation World and become the "sacrifice" of the Rodriguez family.
On her way of revenge, she meet a strange man who asked her about "White Rabbit". She though that would be the last time she meet him but never did she know that destiny would bring them together in unexpected way!
This was the story how Amalia rise from just small "sacrifice" in the Urban Cultivation World into a Bigshoot of the Three Realms!
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Read up to Chapter 100 so far and enjoy the story as a whole. The only issue is the amount of pronouns that are used incorrectly. This issue has become more obvious as I approached Chapter 100, and it disturbs the flow of the story. Hopefully, the author fixes this as having to correct the pronouns in my head every time Amalia is referred to as "he" or another character's gender seemingly changes, makes reading difficult. Also, if possible, it would be nice to have a constant update of Amalia's cultivation process rather than just knowing that she's become stronger. Like telling us when she's become the next level (not anything major though)
From the summary, it looks like the book needed to be proofread for grammatical errors. Too distracting.
I am totally enjoyimg the story. Can the book go for a good edit? Yes. But overall the author is doing a great job. I totally can’t wait to read the next chapter.
I Like the plot, the Fl character is also favorite, the ML is already shown but it seemed it still need long way to go before the romance started. i can wait for the next chapter.
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There may be a slight writing problem.. But the Story & Characters are interesting enough to keep you hooked.. 🆒
An absolutely fantastic story! Yes, the pronouns and grammar aren’t great but they aren’t bad enough to make the reading too difficult. I highly recommend this because of the great characters & story line. A really enjoyable read!
A decent Cultivation story with interesting characters and world building. Unfortunately, the writing quality prevents it from reaching its full potential. Can still be a fun read if you don't set your expectations too high
I really like this book. The characters are interesting. I’m really curious about the two personalities of Kenny Lin. The only downside is the grammar issues
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synopsis is good, progress of the story is very slow. . don't know if it's worth per chapter, is the update regularly uploaded or took to long for a new one? if it is, this story might be forgotten. . it's a pity though, seems promising,
Two chapter a day it's not enough author! Please, update new chapter more!
It's really slow burn, its already chapter 90 but the romance still havent started yet. give me more romance scene!≥3≤
It's really generic plot novel, but since its cultivation novel i will still read it. not bad for pass my time.
Rebirth novels are always too intriguing to read and this is one of the intriguing one . To see how a mercenary is going to survive in a cultivation world sure will be the challenging phase for the mc .
There's no author who doesn't like their novel!