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if you are gonna make your novel in another language you should do the same thing with your title geez. dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot
Good job. Please no dropp ..............................................................................................................................................
mc getting r* was unecessary .........................................................................................................
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really nonsense. I do not recommend reading!!! really nonsense. I do not recommend reading!!!really nonsense. I do not recommend reading!!!really nonsense. I do not recommend reading!!!really nonsense. I do not recommend reading!!!
plz don't drop 🙏 it's a good fanfic story. though just make the story consistent, interesting, fun and logical(fantasy kind) and avoid forced events and power acquisition. oh , and need to fix the wordings.
I love these kind of fanfic. Keep the good job and please don't drop. To love ru is one of the first manga I read and I love it.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I just wanted to comment that you forgot the harem label and what is to Love ru and is it group chat is it obvious right?😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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hahhh, why a lot of author or translator not understand the different between "HER and HIM/HIS" it so simple man, please check it before u upload it hurt my head to understand what are theirs gender