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It's still annoying that you turned the timeline back further than it was but it's still a pretty well done piece of writing.

You were wrong about that, the classes start with the series in origins, Luka is a year older than Adrián and the rest, Chloe doesn't meet Luka until the chapter where Fu loses his memory

Report me? Why? For giving an opinion? I was aggressive in my approach but you take into account what I said and if they are going to report someone it would be you, you were the first to raise the tone of the responses by deleting my review, I gave a review thinking about how the story is going, I don't need 50 chapters of the same thing to give my review if the beginning of it should be what is evaluated to give an idea of ​​how the story is going, you can do whatever you want because there were also good things in them, my priority when giving them is to give my opinion on them it is never to cause hate but seeing that you are someone irrational who does not tolerate or consider anything that is not your own idea I fear that I will not read this story anymore and I will change my review to one that tells how is your treatment towards negative reviews (do not answer this message because I will report it as an attack)

I think you don't feel it, whatever, I won't change my review, you are free to believe what you want, I gave my opinion, but by deleting it you are contradicting yourself, I read it and gave my opinion, if others read it and evaluate based on it the whole fic is their problem, I don't see the point of having to lick your feet and improve your supposedly big ego if you are not able to take criticism.

Thanks for chapter

You just read what you say, what do you call a memory wipe that simply erases your partner from your mind? A mind control if we are blind a bastard. And if they only fall more in love with the protagonist it means that there will not be a damn conflict in the relationship if it is not in an early phase, do you really have to use that argument instead of working on relationships? Look for heartbreaker from worm and you will be truthful because I say it is mind control or a more well-known example would be silk's pheromones that make her sexually attracted to spiderman, it is ambiguous but it is still. I will watch until I consider it artificial and I will lower my rating as it progresses and if I end up hating this series more it is because of you

Sorry if it is not understood, I use a translator since my English is somewhat bad, you realize that Emma's entire character is her past relationship with Abe, yes she can be a good character but as seen in the second trilogy once this was clarified she lost prominence, with the other it would be the same, the fact that your biggest problem in the relationship is simply solved by meeting the children takes away weight from her falling in love, if an ability to make someone faithful is it really faithful? No, since it is an external presence that manipulates someone, if you want to make a story where you collect waifus as if they were trading cards, better say it now. Regardless if there is action one can dedicate the romance and drama to the protagonist, and if I am honest with you, you want to make an action story with a system that really shouldn't be the main focus for obvious reasons, but it is your discretion to decide that. The biggest problem is that you started well, I wouldn't give it 5 out of 5 but 3 out of 5, but you were doing pretty well introducing the world and characters, but when will he get god-like powers? The end of the second book? If it is op the mc, naturally you will have to find a way to strengthen the villain according to the context of the world or add another central theme to it, since, being the most powerful, why would we watch the story if we know he wins?