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On that day, the world we knew came crashing down.
80% of the entire human population was wiped out.
The ones who survived mourned. But it would have been better if those who had died, remained dead.
But all hope was not lost, as a Strange Black watch was gifted to all the survivors. With the help of the watch, those who were brave and deserving, gained incredible powers that surpassed the realm of humanity.
In this strange and dangerous new world, Ashok tries to survive along with his Elder brother and Little Sister while at the same time, aims to become the strongest that he can be.
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Firstly, good to see another Indian author on the power rankings... it was getting lonely. Keep up the good work. Writing quality and update stability = 5 stars The story dev is good with the pacing done nicely. It is a standard apocalypse start nothing really original can be done here and it hasn't reached a point of divergence. Like in the mid stage it could go in the way of base building, organization creation or solo/team exploration or quest for a cure... anything really... but we are yet to reach that point. 4 stars. Character design. I thought that the novelty of having a reincarnator as the brother instead of the MC would be fresh... but, as the story progressed, it became clear why the trope became popular enough to develop into a cliche. The current setup is quite annoying... not only the MC, his AI too. And having two permanent characters being annoying is a big turn off. 3 stars. Although I do realize that this is a setup for future satisfaction from having the MC correct his flaws... but that is no excuse... flawed MCs can be likeable too. World background. Run of the mill zombie apocalypse with a few tweaked details... oh, how could I forget... a terror infinity-esque system. While it is unoriginal, it works... so 4 stars.
Really good story. The first apocalypse story I've read that's set in an Indian setting and it didn't disappoint. While there are grammatical errors they are few and far in between.
Dissapointed to know that the author is an indian.you managed to create an excellent world background and sh*tty charecters for MC and company.i dont deny that this kind of idiots exist but this kind of dumb fools definitely cant live long in an apocalypse which can be a living hell.the MC is so dumd and his elder brother is an idiot who doesnt even say everything properly to prevent unexpected accidents.and his little sis with sh*t for brains complains about boredom and not going outside when she just saw zombie like people killing someone.where is your commonsense man! Your story is a failure the second you choose these foolish charecters to be your mc's because it needs something morethan what common people with common mind sets have to raise to the top (not just a brother from future with some emotinal tramaus).
First apocalypse novel with Indian setting... Story Background characters and plot development is good and the author is doing great work keeping the steady updates and writing quality... A great novel to read and support......
I like this. I prefer mc who relies on himself (solo). 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
One of my favourite apocalyptic genre original novel so far here. Author doesn’t make the MC too OP, and if you’re an avid apocalypse-style novel reader, sometimes you’ll get mad at the MC cause he was irritatingly lame AT FIRST. Good thing that MC’s support character is a transmigrator who came back from the future. Overall, its just awesome.
Writing quality 4 some chapter have a little misspellings and other have a lot which kills the readers immersion. Stability of updates= 5 usually 1 or 2 a day which is really good compare to some novels. Story development 5 because this is new by making the brother the renacarnated not the mc is some I've only seen 3 times throughout my time in qidian and I been here since the beta and that makes this a unique story in my opinion. Character development 4 this I honest dislike the mc I know that the way he was set might be for future settings and other scripts but I seen in other novels where you hate the mc for say the first 3 chapters and every other once in a while. But this you know idk hopefully this gets fix sooner rather then later a couple of my dao friends have dropped this because of this, some said cuz mc was to stupid other told me they believe the mc is too nai.ve to the point it makes him unlikeable. I personally agree with some but wont give up on it just yet this has a lot of potential. Background story 5 has description of a lot of place they travel through giving it a solid foundation to it. 4.5/5 stars.
This novel has been great so far, I highly recommend it. To celebrate me writing this review and to thank you for reading it, here goes an Instant Noodles recipe: Bring 2 1/2 cups of water to a boil in a small saucepan. Add the noodles and cook for 2 minutes. Add the flavor packet, stir, and continue to cook for another 30 seconds. Remove the pan from the heat. Carefully transfer everything to a serving bowl. Eat and enjoy.
Well this is a interesting story so far. In general mc was travelling though past, but in this story mc did not, but his relative. It new. The suspense of the story is very good. Also world building is good. It is zoombi and system combo story line.
from what i read so far i'm enjoying it so i hope it continues to update. this has some interesting apocalypse mechanics and i'm interested in seeing how the plot plays out. (review subject to change as it continues to advance)
Such an unexpected gem, no but seriously, this has to be in the top 5 of the original books. Too much crap up there atm. Soooo, we got a nice apo/post apocalypse setting, in rural India, with BELIEVABLE human behaviors, nice nice nice, jsut dig in, you will get surprised then get hooked by this nice story. Props to the Author Ankit1480.
Really cool! As someone from Europe i find it awesome to read something written by the author in India. The story is well written as well with good character development and an interesting plot. Grammer is good as well, no weird sentences . Keep it up! 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻💯💯💯
I can’t even consider this a spoiler because it shows up in every single FÚCKING chapter, you see the main character Ashok is a indignant, STÚPID, little shit that is completely useless.
Seems really good at the first few chapters, but the stupid Mc that’s still stupid up to the latest chapter ruins it. Like nobody respects him and he needs lily for every flippin thing. Like, I know u want to develop him but it’s not going well at all.
don't read it..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 if you like a MC that is brain dead and follow's his brother that is super secretive blindly despite seeing unbelievable things then your most welcome to read it.
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Love this novel. Finally something different and good. Hope you keep up the translation speed and improve the quality little bit as I find few typos. Other than those story is fantastic. Thanks for the novel. If you ever need help in proof reading or cleaning please mail me. I used all my votes and stones for your novel. Keep going. -Fellow Indian
Same origin full support 😀😁😂😂🤣😃😄😅😅😘😍😎😋😊😊😉😆😗😗😙😚☺️🙂🤗🤔😥😥🙄😶😑😐😈😀😁😂🤣😃😊😋😎😍😘😅😉😆😗😚☺️🙂🙂😑😶🤗😞😟😤😢😭😭😧😖😖🙁☹️🤑🤑🙃😛😛😒😓😔😔😌😴😫😫😪😯🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐😮😈👿😈👿😈👿😈👿😈👿😈👿😈👿😈👿👿😇👿😇👿😇👿😇😇👿😇👿😇👿👹
Gonna leave a shameless 5 star review for my own novel. But jokes aside, I hope my novel's really as good as mother say it is. And that you'll enjoy reading it. Have a great day :)