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摘要
Logan and 4 other people transmitted to One piece world. They get a chance to select their role and timing of transmission. They are transmitted to fight each other. Follow how 5 people with prior knowledge get transmitted and change the one-piece world upside down in their war. Who will the war between them? This is a transmission war in a one-piece world.
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No - harem.
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My name is Logan. I die from a heart attack. After death, I met with God and was given a second chance. Well, things are not that simple. God tells me that I am chosen to be part of the transmission war. According to God I and 4 other people will transmit to one piece world. Our goal is to kill other contestants and become the sole survivor of 5 people. If I become the final survivor, I will get a chance to reincarnate into the world of my choice, but in case of failure, my soul will be annihilated.
Having nothing to fear I decided to take part in this game. Just like that 5 known transmitters fight against each other in one piece world. They turn the world upside down between their war with each other.
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SOME NEW STUFF THAT I TRY TO WRITE. HOPE YOU TRY IT.
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EXPECT FOR A FEW CHARACTERS OTHER BELONG TO ODA.
Not my cover. Want me to take it down comment me on the latest chapter.
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https://www.wattpad.com/story/322320999?utm_source=android&utm_medium=com.miui.notes&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=ChampSing&wp_originator=9ZPOn039Lm6lfPjglzKznYfWY5Qf3pKNe5FJmIE3K74o9TVErh2pbuf5wPhxsybfBkkJGT6eEN6mz159swqzocDQ7dTYL3O%2Fzr1RZvz6LBPLJaAoZ0pdnetS00%2FMBM9J
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So yeah giving myself some good evaluation. Nice plot connection. No over-the-top illogical wishes. Like the plot. Have high potential. Can not wait to see what happens to another war participant. Giving you some examples to write a small review for the novel.
good premis and have intresting main character, cant wait for clash between mc and other 4 charcter. very good fanfic and have great potential, author keep hardwork 🔥🔥🔥🔥
i like the idea so 5 stars from me ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Very good writing quality 4/5. The development of the story is 5/5 as a slow story isn't a bad one. The charecter design is 4/5 as we haven't seen that many original charecters yet but it is good so far. The updating stability is 3/5 but that is not bad as you said you are doing another book. and the world background is 4/5
Hmm... I'm not really good at making reviews but the author asked for it so ye... Writing quality:4/5 can be said to be good or just readable idk but in the first few chaps the grammar is good but I noticed that in the later chaps it gets bad and the typos constantly getting frequent... So I hope that author fixes this. Story development: 5 ,the idea/concept behind this story is what makes it interesting and what keeps me going from reading this(looking forward to how the author execute the meeting of the 5). Character design:4/5 hmm for me this area is kinda lacking you know? U don't get that type of a solid mc vibe and its kinda feel liked forced specially the other characters like WB, for me the WB in this story is not WB you can see it just from his laugh which the author did not get right. (Ugh I suck at this )anyway that's all. Updating stability:5 World background: 5 its One piece so not much to say. Overall 4.6 I think all the author needs to fix is the grammar, typos, and the Proper description of the characters what I mean by proper is how he describe their behaviours etc... Thats all, sorry for my bad writing and review. .
Love the novel. I like the concept. Really common to know but very few novel on it. Waiting for how you will manage all the war participants. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins]
Very nice fanfic. I love the plot. Love it if you release more chapters. Waiting to know more about other war participants. Love the concept [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love so far. Nice plot. Bad with stable update Need more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice idea. Love the concept. Doing good so far. Waiting for more chapters 🐱🐱🐱🐱[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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