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摘要
i woke up to the sound of laughter, i opened my eyes and i saw a man with horns, along with a baby in his arms.
right then and there, i realised that Yamato is mine.
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the picture is not mine, if you want me to take it off, just tell me.
also this is not a story about luffy, so if you don't like that then i recommend not reading.
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Absolute garbage. In the first chapter the mc is going after a 5 year old. Then it’s another system novel and lastly they start talking about sword intent like it’s some cultivation novel. Highly recommend not reading this.
Straight up garbage. The mc is grooming(and kissing) his 5yo sister. Someone get the mf who wrote this behind bars
The writing is pretty bad, the author doesn’t even capitalize I and the main character is grooming his sister.
First chapter got the mc sexually assaulting a 5 year old, insta dropped
Better use world /Verse magic, if you want write the verse/World use the Power System from that world,One Piece already have haki, and devil fruit. - character who reincarnated and kissed his 5 year old sister, what did the MC do in the previous world? pedo?? 😹😹.
Author making his pedo wet dream become true with a 5 year old… This… —-aaaaaaaa so you were 16 in your last life 5 year time skip which would make you around 21 mentally and you tryna go ham on your 5 year old sister I know I am down bad but this is beyond downbad you need to get that check it’s scary people like you outside
So far and good this fanfic has great continuing potential so I'm confident it will be a great fanfic P.S. please make him king of the world
I'm surprised there still are non-degenerates in wn, and why are you claiming you wrote this? This is a translation this guy made, and even the translation is absolute dogshet
This fanfic is complete filth. I recommend not reading this and spare your eyes… A pity you can’t give a zero rating.
i read to chp20 it a hell hole ngl(that coming from me a guy who read mtl on daily basic) 100% would not recommend
This fanfic has great potential and has continuous updates, although it starts a little strange, leaving that aside, the fanfic is incredible.
Terrible, to fast pace and his cheat is too strong. He groomed his five year old sister. Being reincarnated as Kaidos son was a good idea but it was terribly executed.
Mc chinese. Mc pathetic. Mc pedophile. Mc psychopath. Xianxia Wuxia [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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The writing quality is good, I couldn't read past the 1st chapter of the story It's pretty bad actually hence no star to story development, updating is good, overall would not recommend.
The mc is a pedo who has no problem with doing sexual stuff with a 5 year old Yamato , if that doesn’t turn you off from this fic then you’re a weirdo