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摘要
Ethan Brown is a 22-year-old who is a new hire in a company. He lost consciousness suddenly and for no reason after having sex with the owner of the company. (The person who owned the company was a beautiful middle-aged woman). When he regained consciousness, he found himself on a bed in a very elegant room, and in front of him was a very beautiful woman whose beauty cannot be described in words, sitting elegantly on a chair. "Hello," she said, "I am the goddess of lust, sex, love and beauty."
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Read it. If you are looking for a good one piece harem fanfic to keep you entertained then do yourself a favor and just read it. It’s wish fulfillment and you can tell, but sometimes that’s just what you want and this does it well. Author is pretty diligent with updates and while there are some translation shenanigans with (she said/he said) the overall quality of the writing is pretty good. The world is AU and the author isn’t opposed to switching things up. This review was made when chapters were in the 30’s and there are already a fair number of key differences from the original plot. Fair warning, there is genderbending for certain members of the cast. So far Luffy, Zoro, and Sanji are female. Though their characters are still tastefully written and are not degraded by the genderbend. The story is harem, likely going to end up being a large one as well. That being said relationships are progressing at different levels of intensity (a good sign). Anyways just give it a shot and try to get to around chapter 25 or so (relative to current number of released chapters) before judging the story. There is some build up to be had before things start falling into place. Here’s a picture of the notable ‘differences’ you can expect to find in the story:
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I wanted to enjoy this as a comedy but even that is not possible. It is the biggest and stupidiest story you can make up. He got a System from a random goddess and ends up in One piece where some characters are even gender bended. The characters have no personality. Nothing. Worst of all is the writing quality. You can find a missing word in every sentence. I really wanted to like this but this is really incredibly bad.
The first red flag you should know in this story is he get a child in his early journey with gender bend luffy, next he treat his girls like dirt and toys and Author will justify this on the latest chapter where his own goddess lover manipulated him and his se*ual skills, also his first child is also because the goddess manipulated him. And Author do all this because of ? Because he wanted to delete the se*ual skills. now all his girls realised and wanted to leave his crew and no matter how i look at it, Author cant correct this flow of story except rewinding time but that itself make the story stupid af. With this latest development author has not only successfully ruined his own story but made quite alot of readers having bad days. If you cant make a harem novel dont make a harem and ruined the story.
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If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
The author doesn't know the difference between seducing and r*p3, that's a massive clue that the author is lacking of a woman's touch. Chapter 2 Summary: Let's give a naive girl an aphrodisiac and call it seducing because I don't know how to interact with women.
The novel was a simple wish fulfilment but with better writing quality and a consistent update. So in a sence, a good read for people that like to not think too much and doesn't want to read drama land. Some development where forced but in the scope of a "wish fulfilment" story it was good. The moment where everything come crashing down for me was in chapter 59 where the Author choose to make "Lucy" pregnant. A kid at that point completely ruin the development of the story and will most likely not recover from that...
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just bad wish fulfillment... makes me want to commit suicide these replicas of acts (I thought, spoke, repeating lines [I just showed his thought, and suddenly appears again written differently]) that's just bad , very bad msm
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author, are you alive?? well, God Bless you, or your soul... thanks for all... if you are alive, say, if not, RIP... Good Job all the way here u.u
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