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One PieceSign-In/Check-InSystemTransmigrated Protagonist
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Ron traveled through the Pirate World and became a kid on the remote island of East Blue.
Bind the sign-in system, as long as you sign-in in different places, you can get various rewards.
Sign in at the beginning of the game and get rewards [qi and blood +10, day breathing method. 】
Sign in at Shimotsuki Town and get rewards【21st Knife-Raikiri】
Sign in to Sky Island and get rewards【Vitality +10, Ultimate Heart Net. 】
Enies Lobby signs in and gets rewards【Vitality +10, Armament Haki. 】
Signed in Windmill Town, Signed in Logue Town, Signed in Sabaody Island, Signed in The fish men island, Signed in Daughter Island, Signed in Impel down, Signed in Maricia…
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War on top.
When Ron appeared at Marineford.
Whether it was the Four Emperors or Marine Admiral, the whole audience stopped.
Ron waved his hand: “Don’t worry about me, you hit you, I’m just a passing traveler.”
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Well its edited MTL but it gets really Bad. And the peroson who edits has no clue about one piece e.g sword is written as knife and other techniques are just wrongly written. not recomended was a time waste for me
and the following, there are few FF translated from Chinese that is good, this one is acceptable for those who have nothing to read, but I myself will not continue reading it, I don't like the way of speaking Chinese in these FF, so I always hope for a better translation especially not using programs, but thanks anyway.
First put some effort in translating. it is shame if you are not commited to a fanfic then don't just copy filter and paste it on other site at least proof read some things. it is just demotivating to other translator or author who put effort in their novels by cutting time in thier daily life.
The Inuyasha pic attracted me, but judging by the description, its MTL from chinese. I don't want my brain cells to die, so imma opt out.Had enough chinese MTL for one lifetime.
The story is good, the hero is a swordsman who does not eat devilish fruit, is young in age, focused on his growth and did not pass quickly, trains well and ascends gradually, it is better to remove Chinese terms, get you out of the atmosphere of the story, his relationships with the characters are good, continue and do not stop
The story is good and well thought out. It's pretty easy to see that it is translated from Chinese, but sadly it's done with program and not by a person. Otherwise the quality would be way better, probably. But since it was translated by a program it's mostly unreadable for me. Not in a way that I can't understand it, but in a way that I'm getting frustrated that someone goes threw all the effort of copying the raw in a translation program and then uploads it, but is unwilling to do at least a bit of proof reading and editing. If that would have been done it would have been a joy to read the story. But as it is, I can't continue to read it.
Is there going to be any romance????? ........................................................................................................
this is a ff based of of one piece and the story has potential to be decent, however this is a translation and whomever translated this is terrible thay did fine in the first chapter but it only go's downhill.
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Uma boa Fic de One Piece, sem muito exagero, sem MC super Op, sem sistema muito Op, um bom desenvolvimento na história, não é aquelas Fics que enrola muito ou te enche de informação e nada de história, o legal dessa Fic tbm é que o MC não ficou entre os acampamentos clichê (entre pirata e marinha) ele escolheu ser um viajante, eu pelo menos achei refrescante um MC com uma escolha diferente e essa escolha (viajante) é que eu acho que está a verdadeira liberdade😁, em vez de se tornar pirata, marinho, revolucionário... Bem até o capítulo (cap 20) que estou vendo nessa data está muito bom. Obrigado por esse bom trabalho autor-san.
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gonna be honest i love one piece but there are always some ff with chinese touch that destroy every meaning of one piece and in this one i can see that, this is the point and some sentence make zero sence