/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Pokemon Gacha System
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In a world where pirate roams the sea, and humans relied on mystical fruit and strange power to fight for dominance,
A normal university student suddenly woke up, realizing that he had been thrown into the One Piece world.
With the help of the Pokemon Gacha System, Nate began to make his own Pirate crew, travelling the world and aspire to stand at the top of the One Piece World!
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Author i respect you for your choice of honedge but between the cheap harem and the deez 🥜 joke you’ve lost my interest. ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️
There is a lot of missing info that the author just skipped through, and rushed it all with a timeskip of a whole 5 years, That killed the immersion
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Ótima fan-fic, muito bom 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
The concept for the fanfic is good and the system is not too op at the moment as well so it is balanced right now. The grammar and spelling mistakes could use some correction but it good enough for reading. Hopefully it'll be a good novel for the foreseeable future.
Good job ^_^. Need more One piece fanfic with good harem [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
exp, hope to see a nice blend between pokemon and one piece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Story flow is good! And english is quite decent :) hopefully author can continue to keep this up![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
keep up the good work, and hope he will get kaya as one of his harem >_< [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing is good english is also good . The idea is good but author needs a price reference to avoid being confused. Need a lot of chapter at least 10 more to have accurate review. good job author.