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Author i respect you for your choice of honedge but between the cheap harem and the deez 🥜 joke you’ve lost my interest. ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️
Ótima fan-fic, muito bom 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
The concept for the fanfic is good and the system is not too op at the moment as well so it is balanced right now. The grammar and spelling mistakes could use some correction but it good enough for reading. Hopefully it'll be a good novel for the foreseeable future.
There is a lot of missing info that the author just skipped through, and rushed it all with a timeskip of a whole 5 years, That killed the immersion
Good job ^_^. Need more One piece fanfic with good harem [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
exp, hope to see a nice blend between pokemon and one piece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Story flow is good! And english is quite decent :) hopefully author can continue to keep this up![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing is good english is also good . The idea is good but author needs a price reference to avoid being confused. Need a lot of chapter at least 10 more to have accurate review. good job author.
keep up the good work, and hope he will get kaya as one of his harem >_< [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Author i respect you for your choice of honedge but between the cheap harem and the deez 🥜 joke you’ve lost my interest. ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️
Ótima fan-fic, muito bom 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
The concept for the fanfic is good and the system is not too op at the moment as well so it is balanced right now. The grammar and spelling mistakes could use some correction but it good enough for reading. Hopefully it'll be a good novel for the foreseeable future.
There is a lot of missing info that the author just skipped through, and rushed it all with a timeskip of a whole 5 years, That killed the immersion
Good job ^_^. Need more One piece fanfic with good harem [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
exp, hope to see a nice blend between pokemon and one piece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Story flow is good! And english is quite decent :) hopefully author can continue to keep this up![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing is good english is also good . The idea is good but author needs a price reference to avoid being confused. Need a lot of chapter at least 10 more to have accurate review. good job author.
keep up the good work, and hope he will get kaya as one of his harem >_< [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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