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After crossing the Pirate World and becoming Garp's foster grandson, Stone activated the God-level extraction system. Ability to extract anyone's abilities, including devil fruit abilities! Stone.
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Legible writing, although not perfect. Interesting storyline, with no flaws found so far. His system is not instantaneous OP, although I feel frustrated in his place to see sss rank abilities and cannot be extracted. The only problem I encounter in this story is the low number of chapters and the relatively slow release rate. The fact that the chapter is not very big also only worsens this delay.
It reads more like a chinese fantasy novel. If it werent for some of the names being guys from One Piece you wouldnt actually know it was One Piece.
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Damn its badly translated.... dropping it because of this .......................................................................................
Not the best translation but still readable. And the story looks interesting so far. How Do I Post Reviews Under 140 Letters How Do I Post Reviews Under 140 Letters
The story is fine. The power is a fun one and I usually like reading books with Copy ability. The only issue I have is, please stop having Stone say "Cunt" every single time he opens his mouth. At times it is okay, but he is constantly saying it as if there is no tomorrow, it's kind of annoying to read. Anyway, with that being said, I would say the grammar is fine enough for a Fanfic, although it could improve a bit, to this end I would suggest Grammarly, since it is totally free. If the novel is translated, I would beg the translator to leave behind the word Cunt when translating. :D
i found the system interesting, the grammar is good. But, there is thing that are not in the one piece universe (the sword intent and aura bullshit), the mc is (like in chinese novel) a proud guy who enjoy humiliating is opponent, and the reaction of the other character feel... empty (like in almost every chinese novel)
I personally love this and im pretty sure that other people would to this is a easy to read op mc and yeah i just like it ............ . . . . ... . .. . ..... . .
this is just awesome,..........................................................thanks for giving us this godly work.........................😁😁😁😁😁
One Piece story were the Main Character is a Marine! (Really not enough of these kinds of stories) In my personal opinion this story is: Excellently Done!!!
*POSSIBLE TRIGGER WARNING* Alright I wanna make this quick.. The idea is ok barely passable. the writing quality is. .horrifying by American standards. (from my opinion so *TRIGGER WARNING*) Most of the reviews are most likely people who understand this broken english and or relate to it. P. S I am bad at arguing so don't start anything up you will only get a response more like a 11 year old or something brain development with some weird brain functioning.
Very good story, I like. the main character is really cool and i like the system. The story is regularly updated that's good. I hope it will continue.
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
I love that you actually translated this yourself And That It is readable and Not just some google teanslation copy and paste.😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋
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this is very good I want moar the writing could be improved but for a translated novel especially on this site this is very good translate eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I loved this novel......... hope author continue and don't abandoned in between...... note: This review is for extra chapter.... I hope u are reading author ji 🤣
So far this book is good. i love reading this book so much. Author is publishing chapter in consistency. The character is damn cool. i wounder how the story will go.