摘要
In a modern world where cultivators need a place to cultivate or vent their boredom, there are private businesses that set up instance dungeons with the aid of technology and cultivation magic to enable cultivators to train and commoners to experience the life of cultivation. They are called dungeon suppliers.
Xie Jin's one and only dream was to be a dungeon supplier and when his only relative passed away, the relative's inheritance gave him a plot of land and surprisingly, a 'System' Module which the relative had previously used.
With the help of the system, Xie Jin decided to pursue his dream of becoming the number one dungeon supplier.
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(13/8/2020) Author's opinion: At this point, this book had hundreds of chapters worth of content which I had planned for a long time. If you wish to undertake the book and appreciate the story, please read it up till chapter 300s to understand the sudden twist in chapter 100s.
i will admit that during that time, I am still a young budding author and could have expressed the story better in the early hundred chapters. But I assure you the story development is worth it.
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A truly refreshing novel to read from the standard novels here on Qidian. The story is interesting and can easily captivate you to read for hours on end. Very intelligent writing from Moloxiv who is obviously a great talent of literature. I of course think of the writing quality as one of the best in all of Qidian, chapters are released at least once a day aswell as extra chapters so nothing to complain about in that category, the story development is fairly fast but it suits the novel very well and the amount of potential is sky high and from reading up to chapter 60 it's clear that there is already a well thought out road for the story to progress, character designs are perfect for me to build up a clear image of each character without overdoing it, the world has been well described and is very unique for world with cultivation and a very clever take on modern attitude implemented no mass hatred and clan extermination just for giving someone a sideways glance. Thank you Moloxiv for this wonderful novel you have created and I wish you success in the future you have my full support.
I've been looking for a good Dungeon Lord themed novel on this site, something similar to 'My House of Horrors'. I finally found one! Thanks for your hard work, dear author! I've never imagined the dungeon lord trope being crossed with the magic shop trope, so this is an incredibly awesome find for me. What's more is that the MC is not an asocial asshole, haha! What makes this different from the average cultivator-system novel? Several things, I imagine. To me, one of its outstanding features is the adoption of mini-arcs for the minor characters. As far as I know, minor character arcs are nearly exclusive to Japanese light novels. Western novels use the technique too but they don't give the same treatment. So, the character development of minor characters in this story is excellent! Even the dungeon monsters have backstories. The dear author may be an otaku, haha! There are a number of references to Japanese fandoms and comparatively fewer to the Chinese side of things. Dear author, Ranma may be the Best but even he will acknowledge the sheer Awesomeness that is Ip Man! Another cool thing: cultivators in NODS are not immortal gods. there are in fact legal and traditional precedents that allow cultivators and non-cultivators to live in open harmony, which includes the fact that everyone in the world is capable of cultivating. Some people just choose not too. I'd almost say this was a way to nerf the traditional cultivator model if the resurrection system had not been included. Yet another cool thing: the NODS shop uses the latest trends in communications like QR codes and NFC protocols. There are a lot of stories that talk about 'latest technology' and yet the most advanced tech they show is WiFi and phone apps. What the hell, right? The NODS shop also talks about store credits, in-store apps, personalized shop rewards and promos, streaming and pay-per-view services...insidious things. No one does consumerism like America! There were even a couple of chapters when the in-store rewards and promos discussion took over the story from the dungeons. Seriously. Maybe not so much description about the shop mechanics and more about the people. Despite shop-filler chapters, the story manages to a modicum of momentum past a hundred chapters, where it again picks up. Ahh, why is the level of tech in this shop not standard worldwide? If this level of functionality can be done with my phone, I will happily never leave my bed again. The initial premise of the story means there's something for every one: monster capturing, system leveling, some food critiquing, some romance, party and raid battling, cultivation, business management, dungeon creation, infinite world theory, etc. The shop logistics is influenced by other store- theme novels here but it manages to exude its own charm. The use of pocket dimensions to expand and include shop services is great! You know, this is the first MC I've read to be smacked down verbally for blindly following missions instead of actively participating in his own life by the shard of his mother's soul animated by the System into being an interface navigation assistant. A hundred and thirty chapters in and no revenge schemes and blood feuds (yet, anyway), which is kind of refreshing. The customers and the dungeon monsters are starting to shine even more. I think some minor characters have more fans than the MC at this point. Definitely a recommended read.
This is the first review that I warier on this app. I have to say I am very impressed. The quality of the story is better good. It is light and funny but very addictive. I feel I am already getting withdrawal symptoms as I just finish all the chapters. Keep doing good job with this fresh new take on cultivation and dungeons.
So... You deleted fair reviews to get a better rating? Here you go, enjoy 1 star. Delete this one and there will be more. 140 characters are annoying.
For some reason my old review got deleted so i ll repeat myself. The novel starts out fine but at one point the author decides to have the mc suddenly become a killer(to add drama or smthin i guess). Completely kills the whole atmosphere the novel built up and ruins the story. No idea why there are so many positive reviews because the last time i wrote this the novel was rated well below 4*.
my old review was deleted (I think I gave like 2.7 stars) this time I will not take an hour of my time to write an in-depth review. Why should I? This story is bad and it is getting worse over time, earlier chapters (until 100) are pretty good and promising. But at some point the author has stopped trying to write a good story and focused on writing as much as possible. The focus shifted to earning money which is TOTALLY FINE. But he sadly disregarded proofreading and story telling which is NOT FINE.
MAAAN BRO THIS LOOKS INSAAAAANE. I gotta read it! Im just going to give a selfless review even though I havent read it yet I already know its going to be good!.
The first time when i give 5* ... i think 😁 Good story, genial idea, or at least I haven't read this kind of plot until now, very funny. Keep up the good job, and maintain the vibe. I love the personality of the sis 😊 I hope you have read the Book of the Authors, are quite a few tips and tricks there.
It starts good. But the more you read, the more you see the mc got pushed around by the mom. And too many chapter talking about side character that the author doesnt even create. This novel isnt worth reading even if it's not premium. The premise really good tho. And the starting chapter looks promising. But you better spend those ss somewhere else
I like the Way that the author made the dungeon system for this world it’s fun has a lot of pandas in any cracks me up so funny. Story so far is very well put together the progression is pretty good as well.
Amazing so far, hope it continues. The story is really well thought out with no plot holes, has an great story that's easy to follow and keeps you enthralled in the story
While the plot, characters and world setting sound absolutely amazing, I find it just unbearable to read. Grammar is passable, but there's 0 flow in the writing. It's like having amazing ideas but none of the skills to execute them. Random conversations happen that have no relation to the current scene (or maybe just added as an afterthought by the author? that's supposed to give a little bit of insight to character quirks? unfortunately, it's done so badly...) I have a HUGE problem with the pacing and flow of the story (at 6!!! chapters!!!) so while the story really, genuinely sounds interesting, I just can't pick it up. ( T T ) Disclaimer: I'm not that good at English myself, but I'm a very picky reader. It's just how I feel (shrug)
Well I drop the story about chap. 120 The story starts good with store bullding and has a fun undertone. But the biggest negativ point is the system spirit his so cald Mother, after about 100 chap. Her character is so overbearing that you just can't take it anymore. Than she tell him to kill, and forces the regrets off a other person on him to get him To wake up and take charges of his life.... As if there is no other method out there.... And he just takes it and is OK with it when she has clearly tried and manipulated him. So after 100 chap. The fun and games end and your are trust into a murder fest. I don't chare for the later chap. Anymore his mother's character is just to much for me together with his passiv Betamale attitude and the massiv shifts in the tone of the story in not even 5 chap. I'm dropping this **** like it has the plague.
I really like system novels, and this one really catches my interest. so far, it is climbing up my own rankings of books i keep an eye on for the latest chapter. keep up the good work and please keep the chapters coming.
Short: The Story is vast, which makes it pretty expensive to read, but most of the time it is a good read. The Character makes a 180° somewhere in the early 100s Chapter but otherwise is pretty consistent. Lengthy chapters in the 600s chapters to artificially legthen the story. Writing Quality: The Author is often to forced in his writing, which makes Chapters not that good, but most of the times he gets it done right. After chapter 600 it started to get artificially extended explanations and descriptions. Which serve no real purpose (character or world building) Stability of Updates: The Author tries to hard to match with the requests of his readers to release chapters fast, this in turn did dimish the quality of his writing as above stated. It might be a lack of Editing, but chapters feel about 30% longer than they should be After ca. The 600s chapter. Story Development: The story developes on a steady pace, in my sight a bit to slow, espacially After chapter 600, with to many inbetween chapters that serve not much purpose. But this is not my choice, its the authors choice. This makes the story an expansive read tough. World Background: The World is vast, the author even adds more to it by a method of the System the Maincharacter uses. Is the World fleshed out? not even close, there are still so many Questions about Jin's world and this with 630 chapters into the story.
Very interesting concept! I’m impressed! The chapters are a reasonable length and grammar/writing is fair. I really enjoy the idea of Supplying a battle zone. it reminds me of Gourmet Food Supplier of Another World, but with a more sci-fi feel to it. Very nice!
A very well written story with great character and world development. Element of ecchi is a big plus and provides interesting business logic and cunningness. The premise is different from the usual cultivation genre and is quite refreshing. Will definitely follow this work through given how well laid out it is so far.
To be honest, this novel is now one of my favorite on Qidian (alongside TKA). The style is similar to Trafford's trading club where the customers' stories are a big part of the novel. However, I enjoy Number one dungeon supplier a lot more because the MC actually progresses and the grammar/writing is overall better. I can only find one major problem with this novel: it is currently standing on the 2nd rank of original novels, which is completely undeserved.....it should clearly be 1st place.
Read up to 800+ chapter. Story started off very interesting. MC opening dungeon shop with real monster he captured from different world that he could visit. As time goes on he gain more subordinate and his shop became more famous. At least until chapter 500+. After that the story seems to slow down massively. One of the story arc took around 100 chapter which solely focus on 1 battlefield being described by multiple character. It felt too padded. One of my issue with this novel is the writing on the action portion. Author done a good job writing about the business part but the action part is lacking. There is a severe lack of tension during the fight especially in the later part of the novel. I don't know why author felt it was necessary to insert jokes during the fight, multiple times, in almost every fighting part of the novel. It is really out of place, ruin the tension and break the immersion during reading. My last problem is with the characters, especially the MC. He really doesn't have much development even after so long. There is event where he seemed to experience character growth, and then he returned to how he is before. After some time the "growth event" occur again, and he still the same. This happen at least 3 times and changes are barely noticeable. The same can be said for his subordinate, they have no character development at all. The one with most development in character and story seemed to be his customer. Overall the story started off good until around chapter 500. It did not turn bad, just dull and boring.
This is a great combo of Action and Kingdom (well, shop) Building, with a lighter theme. Well, so far. The MC doesn't have any real antags yet, except his bickering with Yun and the System. Their back and forths are great. I feel this novel's main draw is not placed solely on Jin's back, he's got a good selection of Supporting Characters, some of which are clichés (unavoidable as there has been almost every type of character) that move the story. And you get to see their views and a small glimpse of what makes them want to visit his store. Even if it's for band name clothes. This, so far, is a novel with great supporting cast that manages not to overshadow our panda, a decent relationship between Jin and his system, and light comedy. And we are definitely not left wanting on those action scenes. Overall, a favorite novel, amongst translated and originals.