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摘要
Our MC has died? and gets five wishes before he travels to a new world. What amazing things will he encounter? Will he come out on top, or will he fall?
Our MC Cedric Sommerscave became a NPC in Overlord and is now a irregular. How will he go about this, follow him on his journey in a world with different laws!
(ALL CHARACTERS ARE OF LEGAL AGE OR THE AGE OF CONSENT NO MATTER WHATS STATED AS THIS WORLDS LAWS ARE DIFFERENT!)
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pls don't mix cultivation with a thought out magic system in overlord its just like you are spitting on the series also the personality is so bad it's making me vomt
warning this novel is too corrupt the author rape under 10 year girls in this novel. The coruption of this novel is too extreme.i hate lolicon, please arest this author to FBI
Even if this was dropped the Author was clearly too sick because of writing some disgusting r@pe loli fetish *vomits* Hope u found some help Smh
The author writes his depraved fantasies like assaulting children and mind breaking them and more things like these. If you are one of those that 5 star these kinds of stuff then this is for you.
first Review even there only one Chapter at the moment.. dont care, i GIVE YOU 5 STARS ... whatever you write good or bad i will read it tho.. aahhh gonna sleep, 04.30 in the morning now. Good luck bro.
Some ass##les clerly dont know what the evi mc tag is for. Tough i do agree that cultivation and overlord magic systems don't mix well Filler filler filler filler filller filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
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esta buena el cultivo solo se uso en los primeros capitulos como fuente de que se entienda de donde saco el poder eso me gusta sin mucha falta de ortografia actualiza todos los dias se desarolla bien esta bien claro la personalidad del mc se explica bien el fondo mundial lo unico malo es que los cap son cortos pero se compensa con la estabilidad de las actualizaciones
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very good fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................
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Reasons why this novel is not good for me . 1 cultivation : I hate with my soul cultivation novels, how chinese people "think " that " normal people talk " THAT'S NOT HOW HUMANS SHOULD TALK... arrogant, 0% tolerance to ANYTHING and with the will to kill anyone to steal or get anything they want . the worst part is how they talk . Also , I lowered points for not advising in the tags that this is cultivation... 2: Loli : I understand *** slaves ff and such but add that to cultivation and MC thinks that a loli is a fk object and it lowers quality a lot . 3 Overlord usage in a wrong way : to even think of a disgusting "cultivation MC " would go to the world that I love the most is something that makes me angry and disgusted. Cultivation is not good when mixed with a good story with magic rules, awesome magic powers and so on . I would put more but it's late and I'm tired.