/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: With Favorabiltity System
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He found himself waking up as Uchiha Haneda, in the world of Naruto. He found himself in the same generation as Kakashi, Rin, Obito.
Not only he is an Uchiha but there is also future shinobi war. All that not even mentioning One eyed bastard Danzo. As for Madara and Zetsu...
With no other choice than to move forward and with his favorability system he will continue to grow stronger and change the tragedies of the world... As much he as possible.
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good translation but the mc is too Chinese and hides his power for no reason
This is a translation of a Chinese fic. of course you know if you at least read the Synopsis. Thanks for reading. Hope you like the fic and I did decent enough job to translate and not change the style.
I will translate it with Google hehe::: 5/2/2/4/3 For the translator nothing to criticize, Few grammatical errors, but my problem is with the story there are many errors with the dates, the personalities of the characters, things that Kakashi does with the flying thunder, Rin possibly falls in love with Obito, mc pretends to be weak when he already shows that he is strong. That is what I got to see as far as I read it (I probably dropped it). Things I like: mc and Obito's friendship, the system, the comedy is not the best but it is there. and some things that I forgot.
Pretty good story, the protagonist is likeable, the system is cool, his actions are well thought out and interesting. Plenty of likeable characters in Kakashi’s time, I really have very few minor complaints, it’s been a fun read. Sometimes the translations aren’t completely polished for stuff like technique names, character names etc, but they’re pretty minor and easily understood with some context and Danzo is pretty outrageous but that’s nothing new. Overall, I’d give it a try.
Geez its unbelievable strange. Even with mokuton and MS, Kushina and Minato dying in Kyubi incident. Drop after 192. Disappointing. Dont read.
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The writing is really good I will be dropping due to the deaths of sukumo and many others including shisui
This novel started as a banger, but went downhill after 100 chapters. the plot progression and all the good stuff happened at the start was all went down the drain after that. my recommendation is don't waste your time cause I have already wasted mine.
Just read until chapter 39 and that chapter seals it. It’s awful just plain stupid. If any one wants to know just read a few chapter before up to that chapter and you will understand the quality of this is poor even among Chinese fanfic. A serious waste. It had potential but it’s complete garbage at that point.
Очень интересно читать хорошо что без рамантики [img=Feeling it] буду ждать продолжения надеюсь что автор не забросить эту работу гг крутой система тоже
Good work please continue to give the best translation. 😉 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is a nice read!! compared to popcorn light novels, filled with plotholes and irrational mcs, this novel is very complete and wholesome. MC is good, kind, a normal human with normal burdens and ties. The powerups are also not that dramatic and the pace of the story is also good. in short, this is a good read!!
Отличная работа, успехов и вдохновения автору в написании данной работы🫡👍🏼👌🏿👈🏻👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Well, what is raw? .x.x. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . .
The translator did an amazing job I'm currently on ch154 and I don't think this is my cup of tea. I don't understand a lot of things but I think MC's personality is a bit pathetic. That's all I can say, the start is decent enough and the cheats he has still have functionality at the beginning. Reason for quitting: the personal portrayal of each character feels different from my memories.
the storyline is quite interesting,the translation is also quite good...... what's the raw title??? because the synopsis is no longer accessible
It's a glazing fic for a self-insert of an author lost in dreams of greanduer. The system is not sophisticated, the mc uses it straightforwardly, there's no deception or playing with feelings (which is actually good, but the author made it boring imo). It's not funny, there's nothing new, but at least I saw no signs of harem or pedo actions... All in all, it's a 'if you have nothing else to do' type of read.
I don't know how to explain it, but I have a feeling that many Chinese fanfiction is written by a neural network, they are all so similar to each other that after reading one you read them all.
Nothing special about this fanfic. It's like one of the many that you can find in Fanfic.net. The MC is the same old unbothered transmigrator who's too cool for school. Plays 'safe' and hides his powers for no reason whatsoever. The lack of creativity in Naruto fanfics is so aggravating- either they're overconfident Chinese young master stories or something like this.