/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: With Favorabiltity System
摘要
[It's a translation work]
He found himself waking up as Uchiha Haneda, in the world of Naruto. He found himself in the same generation as Kakashi, Rin, Obito.
Not only he is an Uchiha but there is also future shinobi war. All that not even mentioning One eyed bastard Danzo. As for Madara and Zetsu...
With no other choice than to move forward and with his favorability system he will continue to grow stronger and change the tragedies of the world... As much he as possible.
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good translation but the mc is too Chinese and hides his power for no reason
Pretty good story, the protagonist is likeable, the system is cool, his actions are well thought out and interesting. Plenty of likeable characters in Kakashi’s time, I really have very few minor complaints, it’s been a fun read. Sometimes the translations aren’t completely polished for stuff like technique names, character names etc, but they’re pretty minor and easily understood with some context and Danzo is pretty outrageous but that’s nothing new. Overall, I’d give it a try.
Well, what is raw? .x.x. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . .
won't be reading it BC it's a translation and I stay clear of them but good on ya for actually saying it
I like it a interesting story to read to pass the time but not a binge read worthy one too
I will translate it with Google hehe::: 5/2/2/4/3 For the translator nothing to criticize, Few grammatical errors, but my problem is with the story there are many errors with the dates, the personalities of the characters, things that Kakashi does with the flying thunder, Rin possibly falls in love with Obito, mc pretends to be weak when he already shows that he is strong. That is what I got to see as far as I read it (I probably dropped it). Things I like: mc and Obito's friendship, the system, the comedy is not the best but it is there. and some things that I forgot.
Nothing special about this fanfic. It's like one of the many that you can find in Fanfic.net. The MC is the same old unbothered transmigrator who's too cool for school. Plays 'safe' and hides his powers for no reason whatsoever. The lack of creativity in Naruto fanfics is so aggravating- either they're overconfident Chinese young master stories or something like this.
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This is a translation of a Chinese fic. of course you know if you at least read the Synopsis. Thanks for reading. Hope you like the fic and I did decent enough job to translate and not change the style.