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"Remember, I met a Shinigami elementary school student."
Anime & Comics · Gon_6888
corrected ✅
corerected
I think that the character sera a was called the handsome detective.
With a pair of unreasonably delicate cheeks and unique dark green eyes, combined with a light gray visor cap and a very stylish and refreshing short-sleeve shirt, she was simply extremely handsome.
Anime & Comics · Gon_6888
exactly
[The motive for the crime is becoming clearer, and you're unsure if there's a clue you've missed. You, who only lack information, will face the detective who has identified you as the murderer. You suspect, but they still show you good intentions. What will you do?]
Anime & Comics · Gon_6888
I think something similar happens to me, when I read other mtl fics and the names change in each paragraph, I read automatically and when the name appears again my brain blocks for a while
In short, the Organized Crime Countermeasures Department of the Metropolitan Police Department is a department mainly focused on crimes such as gangster activities, violent gangs, transnational crimes, drug smuggling, human trafficking, and illegal arms trading.
Anime & Comics · Gon_6888
It wouldn't make sense to delete the comments with criticisms, and there is still the comment that says it is mediocre, I did not correct this paragraph because I don't know what is wrong. Also, I can't delete the reviews.
Mmm, I think you got something wrong, I didn't delete the criticisms, what happens is that when I correct a dialogue or a word all the comments in the paragraphs are deleted, if you see several of my comments, I accept any criticism, and I never delete the comments, I think I'm mentally fine, but thanks for worrying. Then I'm correcting the thoughts and the dialogues, slowly but I've already corrected some. 🫂( tg)
I'm correcting it
Author, I hope you continue with this level of writing. I wouldn't like this fic to lower its story because some ask for romance between mc and jinx, well if you want it that way it would be fine, but writing it because they comment and forcing it for me would spoil the story a lot.
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Video Games · Drunken_Sailor822