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The story is written by Jebest4781
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This fic has so many cringe naruto tropes that it's taking a lot of focus not knowing when to laugh or cringe, seriously was this like published in the early 2010 - 2015 because I've read some of those and it feels like I'm a teenager again. Anyway I stopped after the fourth chqpter read at your own risk.
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to many cringe moments really wish the fox wasn't in this or a gender change because reading about anko giving head to the fox while talking to Naruto is just gross to read completely ruined it for me seems to me that dc girls going to Naruto while kuruma gets the copy's of girls from there world. no thank you [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] already ruined another dc fanfic for me
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looked 3 chapters and gave up. this is not a novel for those who like naruto. . ..........................
If you're looking for an accurate in character Naruto, then this is not for you... I feel like the Naruto here isn't exactly Naruto cause I don't feel his personality much... Also, it feels like the Naruto is someone who got transmigrated into... However, the writing quality is good just that there are a few flaws but its okay nonetheless...
Not an accurate depiction of naruto at all. he'd never threatened to kill anyone either even if his girl almost died. Zero plot in the story. seems more like a harem story where he takes all of the superheroes girls for himself. sometimes the author forgets what spaces are and you'll see full sentences without one space between any words. The progress of the story is literally zero, he stole lines from characters instead to fit into the plot instead of giving him his own. his powers and looks all change, which is beyond stupid. its just lacking in so much, its sad. not to mention the weird dopplegangers that pop up for no reason. I tried but after 12 chapters I can't waste anymore time on this nonsense.
I haven't read it yet, but I have a question Why every time a fanfiction writes about the universe of Naruto in another world, the mc is always Naruto?? why isn't it some ninja.?? I'm sure it could work as a fanfic for example a ninja who dies during the great wars whether it is the first going to the fourth going in the world of the MCU or the DC