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摘要
The Kaisugan, or "Shattered Eyes," is a Kekkei Genkai unique to a young boy whose soul does not belong to this world. Watching the Kyūbi rampage and feeling such horrid chakra emanating from the demon fox, Kagami Suguru made a vow to himself. His eyes bled with dread, yet gleamed within the darkness.
"This world is broken,"
Shall we shatter it some more?
[ So, I just finished catching up with Naruto: The Wind Calamity and I am dying for new chapters to be released. This Fanfic will serve as an outlet for my desires while I wait. Thank you, Devil_Hex. Love your work. OuO ]
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Love it so far can't wait for more, want to know if this is a original fanfic if not could you let me know the source so I can beige it. If not that ok to just don't drop it if it's your original I really want to know how everything plays out
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This is a pretty exceptional story, I don’t really have any major complaints about it, just minor ones that don’t detract from my enjoyment. I like the Dōjutsu, the protagonist is likeable, his actions have been smart and his morality being Chaotic Neutral is great to see since I love Neutral characters. The only real criticism I have would be that his development in a certain Kinjutsu should’ve been expanded upon by showing us his struggles and thought process in developing, it’s a-bit hard to believe even with his resources that he can accomplish that when he has such a poor talent in everything else. His apprenticeship was also hard to believe but I like it and your direction. Add in that it’s not impossible for it to happen and I'm fine with it, that’s all the constructive criticism I’ve got. Keep up the fantastic work, and I’m looking forward to the future of your story!
Loving this so far, a different take on Naruto from the usual fanfic troops. Really liking the progress so far, keep up the good work Author. Much intrigued to see how far the MC goes and when will he meet his sensei officially. All the best Author !!!
Everything is perfect, except for a few plot holes at the start. But still, great quality, frequent updates, etc.
Very good, just focus on some character interaction though, a little drama would be nice
Definitely one of the best Naruto fanfic in this platform, unique ability with an MC with IQ higher than room temperature is so rare these days. though there's still some incongruity such as the leap in logic for some plot devices but overall it is a very enjoyable read
This is Honestly such a banger that, I almost wept. The work is so good that they should be paid for gracing us with such god-tier work.