/ Anime & Comics / Naruto SI : LIGHTNING AND ROSES
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This is the journey of a boy, through a world riddled with war and travesty.
Will he be able to find a purpose, or will he be consumed by the darkness surrounding him?
Could he preserve his humanity, more importantly, what will be worth his humanity?
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A gem im happy to have come across. I love the path the MC is on. Im fine with his origin. I love his powers. And I appreciate the authors daring and choice deviate from the plot and plan ahead to cover any plot holes made by the deviation. Shows great creativity and commitment to the story. Honestly there isn't anything I've disliked so far. actually love it. as long as there aren't any great twists where he suddenly changes of allegiances, ill definitely become a pat reon member. Many authors who can't deviate from plot usually throw in surprise plot twists that ruin so much. im looking forward to more. Keep it up!
Like 60-70% of the chapters are from other people POV’s so i quit after 14 chapters. Its annoying to constantly read about What others think, feel etc. When well done and sprinkled throughout the story others POV’s can be a welcome break from the MC and expand on the world around hIm/her . However, this story doesnt do it that well
It was a good read initially but it felt rushed after the first 30 chapters. Plot was all over the place and a lot was happening that it was difficult to follow .The romance also felt rushed and i can't get behind the idea of a reincarnated person dating a child.
This is obligatory author review. FRhis is going to be a cool story with a lot of focus on conpletion. Have first half planned up so read on.
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Great story! Good MC, characters development, and powers. Story deviates from Canon.
A refreshing take on naruto after constant op characters. Looking forward to the story.
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feel so rushed, lame and boring tho at first 10 chapters it's quite interesting but as you progress reading it became so boring, so many pov of other characters to the point where I even doubt wether the MC is still the MC. It has grammar and errors but it's readable I'm not that perfectionist about Grammar and such, it's just the context, the scenario, the events on the story is plain and boring.
Haven't read the story yet, but a request to the author After writing the main synopsis, kindly write some info about the mc, what's the name, which village will he get reincarnated into, the clan (if any), etc so that we can think whether we want to read it or not coz some settings are too much of a deal-breaker for me to read fan-fics
the only fanfic where the characters have life and do relevant actions for the unfolding of the story. the original characters are not just useless pieces of paper, they have an active participation in the plot with significant and consistent changes as the story unfolds good work
I like it. The MC has good mentality and his signature Jistu is so strong. Honestly, the grammar needs to be reviewed and there is even a whole chapter with paragraph grouping issues. But... it's a good fanfic
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It's a good read, although there were many POV confusions and gender mistakes the story was well written.I especially liked your divergence from canon and not creating a tag along story character
It is difficult for me to read a story where children fall in love, especially when one of those alleged children is a reincarnated person with memories and values from their previous world. Your fiction has pedophilia vibes if I'm being honest, which is partly why I dropped it. PS: It was good until karin appeared and I must admit that your writing in the first chapters was interesting.