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What would you do if you found yourself reborn into the world of Naruto? Here we find Fuyona Yuki born into the Yuki clan in the hidden mist during the 3rd great ninja war. See his new life unfold with his upbringing in the bloody mist village. How will he affect the Naruto world and will his presence change anything? Yes, this is a self-insert I hope you enjoy!
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This story is great. I love that there is a well written Naruto fanfic that does not revolve around Konoha. The character although powerful does seem possible.
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This is a good book im pretty sure i saw this on FanFiction.Net and im pretty sure this is the same author, if it is this story hasn’t been updated for months so either this author is hoping to continue the story or their just trying to get more fans. This book is ok kinda slow updates but its a good story to read if you h e nothing to do. This story is just a part of the many Ok naruto stories.
As of chapter 53 it is officially a harem. I have never seen any character in naruto with more than one partner at once, so you would the mc do so? It just feels so forced, but other than that it is a solid book with good character development. I also appreciate the fact that it doesn't have a mc from konoha with uchiha, senju, bloodline.
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Reviewed as of chp35: Grammar is alright, however quite a few spelling mistakes and liberal use of quotation marks instead of apostrophes in their intended context causes some confusion. Thankfully the sentences are still readable. Plotwise, it's interesting and the author has some good ideas. It is merely the execution of said ideas are at best average. Perhaps this can be a point of improvement for the author. Character wise, the MC's abilities are interesting to read about, both kekkai genkais are powerful and offer some creative battle scenes. The problem is that the MC's personality is abit jarring. While reading the beginning chps, the MC seemed cold, ruthless and pretty much an ass. But suddenly he cares more about his colleagues than a woman(his mom) who took care of him for years, risked life and more for him to protect but he doesn't care about her. That's fine, I can suspend my disbelief as maybe he's an unsympathetic character with no real connection to anyone who is starting to open up. But suddenly he also cares about random teammates that he just met and that's just jarring. His personality switch was just too jarring and given no monologue for the reader to see the process of his change. Also the author writes him(maybe unintentionally) as someone who panics quite a fair bit. I'm not entirely sure but I assume it's cause the author wants to write a scene with drama but again, the execution falls flat. He isn't even a normal ninja but for some reason has these moments of utter panic. Confusion, worry, frustration etc are normal emotions but panic from someone who was trained and has not even use his full abilities in a fight seems ridiculous. Now the side characters are neither here nor there, they are simply side characters. Like how the MC acted before, I find no connection nor am I invested in any of them. Unfortunately, some of the focus on their fights are fine but sometimes lengthened too much for my liking(tbh I skipped some of the side char fights because like I said no connection or investment on the reader's side, we have no time to build it up, we are simply shown their MC's teammates before jumping into fight scenes that in the grand scheme of things don't really matter). I believe the author can definitely make some improvement on the execution of character development and their inner monologues. Give us more details on their aspirations, short backgrounds or even their connections to other characters. For updating stability, it seems reasonable. Now world background, it's Naruto, it ain't super deep but definitely more than good enough. I like how the author started the MC in a different village other than Konoha for once. Thanks author for sharing the story. This review isn't to bash but to critique it a little in hopes that it might be useful to you. Please continue to write and improve!
If you are really the owner of this fanfic and not an impostor, you could publish a statement on fanfiction.net, saying that they are the same person? I'm sorry if it's really you, but I'm doing it just in case, I don't feel right reading something that can be stolen from someone else. Maybe I'm a little paranoid, but it wouldn't be the first time it happens, and I find it suspicious that you only publish chapters here, when the story started on fanfiction.net
Good story embodied in the hidden fog village and has two Kiki Genkai has a good relationship with many people there are many original characters developed a new combat style
this is a great story, the author did a great job taking the played out naruto verse and giving it his own spin. I truly enjoy reading it, it has a consistent-ish updating schedule and well proportioned chapters. over all a great read.
I loved it, it was truly interesting how he changed a lot of plots and I really enjoyed how he never met the main cast or befriending naruto, not that I hate that its just really common for the oc to be born into konoha either with a family or in an orphanage which gets boring after a period of time, so once again I give my regards to the author.
This is one of the best Naruto fanfic on web novel if not the best. The mc isn't from the hidden leaf he doesn't have some dumbass system, cheat eyes (sharingan) or the god eyes (rinnegan) or some cheat ass ability granted by some god he just took what he had trained and become a badass it's just simply amazing just read it. Only problem is the shakey update schedule and even that's getting fixed.
In the overall, it's a good novel if the author work on the character and writing quality. I recommended this novel to every fan of Shinobu world.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Great fic. How often do we get updates? .... ...... ..... ..... ..... ..... ji n join e dwj dhwjnjsan ionwdoanon ojdwnaonon jdnwono. ndwaonon
One of the best Naruto stories I have read defo top 5 and the story still has so much left to give. The author is definitely a very talented writer and story teller. Great work author san I can’t wait to see where you go with this story and other stoies you write.
Definitely the best Naruto Fanfic. Everything about the story is great, but you have to wait for a while for it to update[img=update][img=update]
i cant say anything, just look at the star, u will never be dissapointed ....................................................................................................................................
The best fanfic. Fuyona is the most well developed orginal character i've seen His relation with the canon characters are unique, i still want to see Zabuza working under his command but the rest is perfect. Congrats
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pretty decent .............................................................................................................................
The best story that I have ever read so far. New environment rather than the cliche of being reborn in Konoha. Author-san did a lot of reading because the timeline is as good as it can be! No overused Kekkei Genkai and good referencing to historical events in the series. The main character does not follow canon and does all he can do for his village. He does not act on impulses, aka not dumb as naruto. Updates aren't as frequent as I would have liked, but they are still there. You can't expect such a masterpiece written fast. There is a lot of thinking and planning done before each chapter. I can't recommend it enough.
Review at chapter 16 WQ 4 🌟 : This author is a good writer. Very few mistakes and all in all a pleasure to read. SD 1 🌟: That was awful. To begin, he is abandoned by his clan coz he had two Keikkei Genkai. Then he decided to hide his Keikkei Genkai. Now he's named Yuki and when he had to reveal one bloodline limit he reveals the Shikotsumyaku. After that he's ent to frontline and they managed to get ambushed in their own base. Then Sarutobi comes to attack himself (yes a Kage fighting in a little squirming like that). He managed to escape and years passed. He participated in Rin incident and was quick enough to flee before Obito's rampage. Then suicide mission after suicide mission. There you think that's it. Obito discovered his implication in the matter and wants to kill him. But no, nothing. He could have been framed as a traitor, he could have been outrightly killed but nothing. Then he let Kakashi in battle and beat him (it's normal) but doesn't kill him. It doesn't make any sense. It's stupid. CD 2 🌟: I would've given zero stars if I only focused on MC character. First point, each time he should react promptly he freezes then do something stupid: At the robbery in his first life, when his mother was defending him, during the test at the academy,... Second point, what's his goal. His said he wants to change the world and his village. Ok, that's the kind of idiotic and delusional thing every MC does. But how does he want to change it? Just destroy canon? I don't think so. He had his fair chance of doing that by killing a plot relevant character. By changing the world in an utopia? I don't think so otherwise he should join Akatsuki and help Madara achieve his goal. I came to the conclusion that despite his claim of wanting to have an impact on the world, he is doing his max to preserve canon. Otherwise just saving his clan would have been impactful enough. Third point, why was he even an SI? I think any random child with delayed emotions who obtain flashes of the future would have been as good as him. The only use he does of his canon knowledge so far is recognizing canon characters and using Haki and Kimimaro jutsus. He is as loyal to the village as any brainwashed kids would be. Even more as Zabuza and Kisame will betray the village. They are sending him on suicide mission after suicide mission and his only reason to stay in the village is that he wanted to change the village. He's the Mizukage loyal dog even though he knows he is controlled by others. He claims that he wants to save his companions but takes stupid decision after stupid decision (for their assassination, they should have just gone straight to kill their target without any attempt at infiltration and it would have been more stealthy and intelligent than what they had done). Anyways, others characters are well written enough, the hot headed teenager, his crazy father (I suppose), Ao,... US 4 🌟: For what I'm seeing all those sixteen chapters have been dropped yesterday. I have my doubts but 4 🌟 for now. WB 2 🌟: The ages aren't consistent with canon. Ao is 8 years older than MC who is 3 years younger than Zabuza. He should have been older. Anyway all those aren't important. What's important is the absurdity of the test they make the kids pass to become genin considering their situation (they were in war and in need of cannon fodder) and Kakashi Saïd that the test was a one vs one fight to death not some battle royale. How absurd was their war: Kiri nin hiding in trench's against potential earth Jutsu users, how disorganized were their troops, why would Kage broadcast their locations. MC was trapped and on the verge of dying and two Root shinobi against him. Three Kiri shinobi come and the Root Shinobi abandon their mission. Yes you didn't read wrong. MC is leading a team of elites only weaker than the 7 Swordmen. They were four in all and their mission, kidnap Naruto. Okay, they got surprised by a random team of Konoha (an Uchiha, an Inuzuka and an Akimichi). MC take care of the Uchiha and it wasn't easy. The others three elites lose against the two from Konoha and two died and the last one saved by MC. The same MC that difficulty kill a random Uchiha quickly kill two Abby and beat Kakashi (and doesn't kill him because?) and come back to save his teammates. Now, the question is: If any random ninja of Konoha is stronger than elites of other villages why does these villages still fight? I will stop here. If all previous points are acceptable to you go read it, it's a good find.
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