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Have read your novel starting afresh, what I can say is wow u made the novel addictive and characters immersive as if am watching an Oscar worthy series , you are doing great Mr author , world building and new summon lands makes me wanting for more But can I make a suggestion Mr author since fuyona has already mastered sage mode he still hasn't become a true jinchuriki you just showed us is true jinchuriki form a blue colour but u said it will take time, well that isn't an issues But my suggestion is the ice release has great potential it's like wood release of hashirama senju , Utility, offensive and defensive , I thought since he has mastered Ice sage mode he should be able to create ice golems just like wood golems and also develop his own sage body since the ice sage mode is different from toad sage he can keep his sage mode indefinitely I also like to suggest if he will be able to develop his own Gundam since power houses in Naruto have giant avatar such as susanno and Naruto kyubbi mode , maybe fuyuna maybe able to mix his sage chakra , tail beast chakra in to his own personalized golem that will have a strong defence as a perfect susanno and agile as hashirama wood golems But u know best Mr author, thanks for the novel and collect my 5stars
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This is an amazing novel!! One of the best Naruto ffs out there and definitely worth the read. I hope the author does not drop it🙏🏻
ok sorry for the upload speed review. I missed to this on YouTube and I loved it. Mc had a hard childhood but built his character up from it. Few plot holes and really enjoyable. Strongly recommend to read.
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Muy bueno , me encantó , sigue siendo muy buena , pero solamente e entristece saber que la historia se tardar mucho tiempo para que se llegue al inicio del anime.
Very good story, mc is overpowered but not in a way that makes it seem unbelievable as he doesn't just beat everyone like a lot of fanfiction. Story development is good there are a few twist and turns as well as original characters and story backgrounds to make the story interesting. Character design and development is pretty good the characters don't feel static they actually change and fee like real people. Although I wish he updated more stable and frequent, but the author does have a life so that may be unreasonable.
Me gusta mucho la historia , y creo que debería tener más detalles en algunas partes, por qué no les llega a entender, pero es solo eso ya que sigue siendo muy buena la historia
wery well written,but sadly the author chosen mc is very dull and has no initiative no goals no personality its like reading naruto from the perspective of a brainwashed root anbu who only follows orders and does not even think about anyhing else than the orders hes given. had to drop when even hes mothers death was a cliffnote for the mc. thats how much emotion he has. its like looking at a robot going through the motions of pretending to live in hidden mist.writing quality is great tho. just wish the mc wasnt so dull.
Im in chapter 15 Im so confuse his 35 years old and he know that village brainwashing the kid but he still follow the mizukage its pretty clear that obito put mizukage in jensutso assign ninja a mission to death and weakening the mist village....sorry for bad english
The story now just mainly focuses on his students as it seems he wants timelines to match up with canon so they just fill in time
story is very good you should give me next chapter ........................................................................................................................................
Naruto fan story tells about a person from a village The Hidden Mist has two Kiki Genkai The story is great, I recommend everyone to read it قصة معجبين ناروتو تتكلم عن شخص من قرية الضباب المخفية لديه اثنين من الكيكي جنكاي القصة رائعة انصح الجميع بقرائتها
As of chapter 53 it is officially a harem. I have never seen any character in naruto with more than one partner at once, so you would the mc do so? It just feels so forced, but other than that it is a solid book with good character development. I also appreciate the fact that it doesn't have a mc from konoha with uchiha, senju, bloodline.
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Melhor fanfic de Naruto que eu li vc escr vê muito bem e não se perde com pessonagens que pode vencer kages com 11 anos igual a algumas outras se tiver escrito ou fanfic me fala pra mim lê...Ótimo trabalho!!!!
mc not a bright one at the start. keep thinking but no plan at all. just following orders.. will update the review later as i read along..
does the mc even realise he been brainwashed to become a pawn of the village .................................................................
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I like it and it’s a decent read but there’s a lot I dislike, and unfortunately the same couple of things keep coming up. 1. It’s a story that relies on the mc forgetting the details of Naruto a lot. It would be fine if it was background stuff but if you get isekai’d and find out you’re in the mist, you remember everything about the mist and don’t forget it. It’s just a plot crutch used a lot that’s annoying to read. 2.The fights have problems, two to be exact. One:the enemies always feel boosted over to what they’re supposed to be, and the mc is always underpowered or holding back. It’s happened In every major battle. And two: the times where it’s a major battle the author forces the side character battles down your throat. It starts off cool then cuts to a side battle, then The next 3 chapters 70% of it is side battles then the rest is the mc battle for a cliffhanger. It gets me way less invested in the main battle and makes me hate the side battles. 3.Another problem is the mc does the hero comes in at the last second soooooo often. Like in the last 3 arcs he did it. I’m excited for the next couple of arcs and to see their development. I just hope the last second saves and the mc holding back/having trouble with opponents he should easily beat, stop. And hopefully less side battles.
This is a masterpiece 🔥🔥 .............................................................................................................
Its a good fic to read when u have nothing Else to do or waiting for other fics to update. I found it more compelling during the earlier chapters but it’s still okay
It's a really great Naruto Fanfiction!!! 👍👍👍 This the first time I read Naruto fanfic where MC reborn/transmigrated not to Konoha, but to Kiri.. I love how you make Fūyona have 2 Kekkai genkai (and it compliment one another.. he even can use them together)... I love how you make Fū loyal to Kiri, he even became Mizukage.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍😍😍
One of the best Naruto stories I have read defo top 5 and the story still has so much left to give. The author is definitely a very talented writer and story teller. Great work author san I can’t wait to see where you go with this story and other stoies you write.
This has to be the best Naruto fan fiction out there. It’s going at a good pace, the Mc is not cringe. He actually has a life and doesn’t go around thinking he’s better than the original characters.
Definitely the best Naruto Fanfic. Everything about the story is great, but you have to wait for a while for it to update[img=update][img=update]
Have read your novel starting afresh, what I can say is wow u made the novel addictive and characters immersive as if am watching an Oscar worthy series , you are doing great Mr author , world building and new summon lands makes me wanting for more But can I make a suggestion Mr author since fuyona has already mastered sage mode he still hasn't become a true jinchuriki you just showed us is true jinchuriki form a blue colour but u said it will take time, well that isn't an issues But my suggestion is the ice release has great potential it's like wood release of hashirama senju , Utility, offensive and defensive , I thought since he has mastered Ice sage mode he should be able to create ice golems just like wood golems and also develop his own sage body since the ice sage mode is different from toad sage he can keep his sage mode indefinitely I also like to suggest if he will be able to develop his own Gundam since power houses in Naruto have giant avatar such as susanno and Naruto kyubbi mode , maybe fuyuna maybe able to mix his sage chakra , tail beast chakra in to his own personalized golem that will have a strong defence as a perfect susanno and agile as hashirama wood golems But u know best Mr author, thanks for the novel and collect my 5stars
揭示劇透 This is an amazing novel!! One of the best Naruto ffs out there and definitely worth the read. I hope the author does not drop it🙏🏻
ok sorry for the upload speed review. I missed to this on YouTube and I loved it. Mc had a hard childhood but built his character up from it. Few plot holes and really enjoyable. Strongly recommend to read.
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Muy bueno , me encantó , sigue siendo muy buena , pero solamente e entristece saber que la historia se tardar mucho tiempo para que se llegue al inicio del anime.
Very good story, mc is overpowered but not in a way that makes it seem unbelievable as he doesn't just beat everyone like a lot of fanfiction. Story development is good there are a few twist and turns as well as original characters and story backgrounds to make the story interesting. Character design and development is pretty good the characters don't feel static they actually change and fee like real people. Although I wish he updated more stable and frequent, but the author does have a life so that may be unreasonable.
Me gusta mucho la historia , y creo que debería tener más detalles en algunas partes, por qué no les llega a entender, pero es solo eso ya que sigue siendo muy buena la historia
wery well written,but sadly the author chosen mc is very dull and has no initiative no goals no personality its like reading naruto from the perspective of a brainwashed root anbu who only follows orders and does not even think about anyhing else than the orders hes given. had to drop when even hes mothers death was a cliffnote for the mc. thats how much emotion he has. its like looking at a robot going through the motions of pretending to live in hidden mist.writing quality is great tho. just wish the mc wasnt so dull.
Im in chapter 15 Im so confuse his 35 years old and he know that village brainwashing the kid but he still follow the mizukage its pretty clear that obito put mizukage in jensutso assign ninja a mission to death and weakening the mist village....sorry for bad english
The story now just mainly focuses on his students as it seems he wants timelines to match up with canon so they just fill in time
story is very good you should give me next chapter ........................................................................................................................................
Naruto fan story tells about a person from a village The Hidden Mist has two Kiki Genkai The story is great, I recommend everyone to read it قصة معجبين ناروتو تتكلم عن شخص من قرية الضباب المخفية لديه اثنين من الكيكي جنكاي القصة رائعة انصح الجميع بقرائتها
As of chapter 53 it is officially a harem. I have never seen any character in naruto with more than one partner at once, so you would the mc do so? It just feels so forced, but other than that it is a solid book with good character development. I also appreciate the fact that it doesn't have a mc from konoha with uchiha, senju, bloodline.
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Melhor fanfic de Naruto que eu li vc escr vê muito bem e não se perde com pessonagens que pode vencer kages com 11 anos igual a algumas outras se tiver escrito ou fanfic me fala pra mim lê...Ótimo trabalho!!!!
mc not a bright one at the start. keep thinking but no plan at all. just following orders.. will update the review later as i read along..
does the mc even realise he been brainwashed to become a pawn of the village .................................................................
Great fic. How often do we get updates? .... ...... ..... ..... ..... ..... ji n join e dwj dhwjnjsan ionwdoanon ojdwnaonon jdnwono. ndwaonon
I like it and it’s a decent read but there’s a lot I dislike, and unfortunately the same couple of things keep coming up. 1. It’s a story that relies on the mc forgetting the details of Naruto a lot. It would be fine if it was background stuff but if you get isekai’d and find out you’re in the mist, you remember everything about the mist and don’t forget it. It’s just a plot crutch used a lot that’s annoying to read. 2.The fights have problems, two to be exact. One:the enemies always feel boosted over to what they’re supposed to be, and the mc is always underpowered or holding back. It’s happened In every major battle. And two: the times where it’s a major battle the author forces the side character battles down your throat. It starts off cool then cuts to a side battle, then The next 3 chapters 70% of it is side battles then the rest is the mc battle for a cliffhanger. It gets me way less invested in the main battle and makes me hate the side battles. 3.Another problem is the mc does the hero comes in at the last second soooooo often. Like in the last 3 arcs he did it. I’m excited for the next couple of arcs and to see their development. I just hope the last second saves and the mc holding back/having trouble with opponents he should easily beat, stop. And hopefully less side battles.
This is a masterpiece 🔥🔥 .............................................................................................................
Its a good fic to read when u have nothing Else to do or waiting for other fics to update. I found it more compelling during the earlier chapters but it’s still okay
It's a really great Naruto Fanfiction!!! 👍👍👍 This the first time I read Naruto fanfic where MC reborn/transmigrated not to Konoha, but to Kiri.. I love how you make Fūyona have 2 Kekkai genkai (and it compliment one another.. he even can use them together)... I love how you make Fū loyal to Kiri, he even became Mizukage.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍😍😍
One of the best Naruto stories I have read defo top 5 and the story still has so much left to give. The author is definitely a very talented writer and story teller. Great work author san I can’t wait to see where you go with this story and other stoies you write.
This has to be the best Naruto fan fiction out there. It’s going at a good pace, the Mc is not cringe. He actually has a life and doesn’t go around thinking he’s better than the original characters.
Definitely the best Naruto Fanfic. Everything about the story is great, but you have to wait for a while for it to update[img=update][img=update]
Muito bom, uma das minhas fanfic's de Naruto favoritas!