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After being thrown tens of meters away by Truck-kun, I found myself in a completely dark area, surrounded by constellations I had never seen before.
They said I died when I shouldn't have, disrupting the timeline.
They said that to fix the mistake, they had to throw me out of the reincarnation cycle and reactivate a timeline without me.
Since I could no longer live in this universe's timeline, I learned that they rewarded me with the chance to be resurrected by preserving my memories in a new universe.
There were two big Wheels of Fortune in front of me
When I spun the first wheel of fortune, I learned that the universe in which I would be resurrected was the Naruto universe, but that wasn't enough to deter me.
According to what he said about the constellations, by spinning the second wheel of fortune, I would get one of the biggest tricks in the world of Naruto.
When I spun the two wheels of fortune, I saw that what appeared was a jujutsu template system. While I was about to ask the constellations why I didn't get a gift related to the Naruto universe, my consciousness turned off and I found myself in the body of a baby.
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Small note: In the timeline I based on while writing FF, Naruto is born 65 years after Konoha was founded. source(tumbler - belive it )
note 1: the main character is a bit stupid and has mental problems but he doesn't realize it
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Why does most of the jjk fanfics have mc who has mental problems or straight out edgy psychopath .......,........,.............................,............................................
painful to read, plenty of annoying mistakes but that is not my main problem. for some reason mc is schizophrenic with a lot of hallucinations that don't make him appealing to me. really hard to read about character that I can't like. if you wish you read that novel be warned , there is very little logic in the mind of the mc.
the only thing i dont like is how stupid the mc is omg he 20 in mind yet he acts as a dom child without any intellect . you also give him templates to fast in my opnion it doest give the story any progression at this point he wil have every op power in jjk long before minato even becomes hokage ps i like that you take give pols on themplate end all but i can tell from diffriends story good writer regret doing this and give up on there stories becouse its not there vision anymore and become bore of it
Awesome work, this fic has potential. I think you should make MC tell his mui tenpen ability to Danzo( MC could make a Twist here and there like he has limitations 2-3 people per day, and hold someone like 1 munite etc.)cuz at one point he will figure out. He is not Loki of konoha for no reason.
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I am enjoying the series and mc too oyf9f66oyiditddididtdiydiditdididididdiddtidididififififoyfyofyfyoffofofuofoffofofofyofyofyofoydodofofyfofoyfykfgpuuofiyfifofofyoofoudoyydyoyooykggggkckfoufyofofdiddtiddiyxgkxkyxkyyddyxgyyoiydidtdididididtidididididyofkcyoxyifiycyococoyffyfoyfyididtiuriggkgkgkckdkdodidiidiydd
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this is history has potential , continue ! [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]
It's a good fic it could become something great .,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.., ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,
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It has excellent quality. Of course it's a cliché, but a well-done cliché can warm any reader's heart. I hope this work has more chapters and character development.
This is by far the worst fanfic of both naruto and jjk i have ever read. Mc has no personality, no hardwork, acts like a pedo sometimes, very annoying like a chinese manhua mc. The author said his english is bad but i feel like he doesnt even have any intention in improving it, no world exploration, major characters in naruto show up just to disappear forever because they served their use to show how op and amazing the mc is. Just dont read this.
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hi guys Please share any translation errors you encounter with a paragraph comment.Unfortunately, my English is not enough to write a book. For this reason, I get help from translate and AI while translating the original text into English. (don't get me wrong, this is my original work)