/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Hanma Yujiro's Legacy
摘要
The infamous Hanma Yujiro, the Ogre, was sent into the tumultuous shinobi realm during the era of legendary figures such as Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara in his latter years with a younger body.
Naruto, "Dattebayo!"
Sasuke, "Hn!"
Madara, "Let's dance, Yujiro!"
Kurama, "I, Kyuubi, declared you as the Tailless Tailed Beast!"
Hashirama, "Senpo: Mokuton: Shin Susenju!"
Kaguya, "All chakra…belongs to me and once again, all chakra shall become one!"
Yujiro, "Ehuk, ehuk, RaHAhAHahA!”
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A/N: Chapter release at 11 p.m, my local time GMT+8.
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寫檢討
Do you love Naruto? Do you love Baki? Then read this story! It has both! Yujiro meets Hashirama and Madara in an epic collision of martial arts and ninjutsu! It's like watching a jacked-up, women-loving beefcake, punch his way through shinobi battles. It's a work of art! Let's not forget The Man, The Myth, The Legend himself! Iroh is here! Why are you still here? Go read the story already!! Enjoy and have fun reading!
This fanfic, set in the world of Naruto and inspired by Hanma Yujiro's legacy, left me rather disappointed. It has some serious issues that hinder the overall reading experience. First and foremost, the choice of a first-person point of view is disorienting. It makes it hard to connect with the characters and the world, which is crucial for any story. The sentence structure is also problematic, with sentences that often feel disjointed and hard to follow. The story rushes forward at a relentless pace, leaving little room for character development or world-building. This is a missed opportunity, as combining the Naruto and Hanma Yujiro universes could have led to a rich and immersive narrative. Unfortunately, this potential remains largely untapped. The main character in this fanfic is a significant letdown. They lack the charisma and likability that one expects from a protagonist in the Naruto universe. Instead of a well-rounded character, we get someone who is one-dimensional and hard to root for. In essence, this fanfic feels like a rushed attempt at wish-fulfillment, lacking the structure and depth that would have made it a compelling read. It's a shame because the premise had so much promise, but the execution falls short.
bro please keep this webnovel going I see so little baki fanfics so please continue this 🙏 😭
The fic is quite good or should i say it is good! The character seemed quite alive and have their personality just like what they’re shown in the anime! Check it out guys
This book brings out what we would expect if yujrou transmigrated to the Naruto world with a chakra circulatory system. Also, it helps that yujirou is more caring towards his wives and is not alone in terms of strength.
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Hi, I'm a new author! I love Hanma Yujiro and this fan-fiction is inspired by the Wind Calamity! There's thousands of Naruto fan-fiction but there's very few of them that create a logical Narutoverse. I want to try creating that kind of Narutoverse but the vibe hopefully will not be serious at all! Because it's Yujiro, dimwit! Of course he will be confident, wise and the STRONGEST! If you have any cool idea, training or anything, I'll see if there's anything interest me and I'll include them in small arc. Thanks, Ciao