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Naruto: Gate Of All Dimensions

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作者: Flame_Spirit

4.36 (52 評分)

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My name is Asakura Hao,and I have traversed to the Naruto world without kekkei genkai. But! I didn't expect that I got the Gate Of All Dimensions! Not only did I get the Flame Devil Fruit,but also a bunch of other items from other worlds. Things are starting to get interesting!

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(Uses [Naruto: the law of the devil] as a foundation,you can check that out if you want, Will gradually change more in the future of the story)

Read chapters ahead at www.p@treon.com/Flame_Spirit

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whitecrow

Bonus points for the story not starting at the start of canon, but it reads like a cultivation novel, hitting all the tropes, including, "OMG, he's talking with the genius of our clan, how dare he!" The grammar is good, with little to no mistakes, so there that. However, the mc comes off as an entitled brat in the beginning of the story as he complains for not having a cheat. Obviously, he gets one immediately after, barely giving him any time for character growth. Other than that, he's apparently a super genius, who managed the Tree and Water Walking in a single day. Not to mention he learned the Shadow Clone Jutsu as a 5 year old despite having less Chakra than a genin... yeah.

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Semuel_Set

this fic very similar as Naruto: the law of the devil ( MC orphan, "son" of Nana Yakushi, don't like kabuto, shisui friend, also beat izumo and kotetsu, and between Lilit and Devil from Law more same things than i think. (Same awaking, dialoge (but different power), and price for abillity,)

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shin_rae_miu

I give up at chap 30/35. like bruh the details the details is important. this Chinese novel has a potential really but it seems that iits either the translator/editor has no supporters/underpaid or he/she did not watch naruto at all. like he translated the story edited the grammar and thats it. he/she forgot an important part when it comes to chinese fanfic and that is the terms and words they used. ALMOST all translated chinese fanfic in webnovel is trash because of it. you know what? I give up good luck in this fic hope you re-edit it while its still has 35 chapters

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Flame_Spirit

Author here~ please feel free to criticize and give suggestions how I can improve. Thanks for reading @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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Knight087

A well written fanfic, not at all rushed. The plot, characters are all well developed. Little to no grammar mistakes. Hope you increase the update stability and don't drop it.

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Gotha
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Well... the idea is not bad... but seriously author? It seems like you have read way too much cultivating novels, the characters behave like they are straight from those cultivating novels and has lost the "Naruto" vibe and there are way too many plot holes.

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Nix_Phoenix

anyway you know how to surprise you're reader I mean I thought of a lot of power but Ignir escaped me: Fire dragon slayer, Demon slayer or fire god, lineage Bune(DxD), Incinerate Anthem (DxD), Johnny Storm / Human Torch (Marvel Comics), John Allerdyce / Pyro X-Men, Phoenix Lineage (DxD), Nuova Shenron (Dragon Ball GT), Genryusai Shigekuni Yamamoto's Ryūjin Jakka (Bleach), The Sun rising of Feitan (Hunter x Hunter) , the Quirk - Cremation of Dabi (My Hero Academia) , the powers of the Phoenix Force (Earth-616) | Marvel, The Powers of Zarathos (Earth-616) Marvel.... in short among all I did not even imagine The fire dragon Ignore congratulations and thank you for the chapter

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Kenny3408

I like the story keep it up. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Mstrvin
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A great read so far, waiting for more updates in the future . Hope author will pick this up again and continue where he left. Looking forward.

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Butcher_

nice............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................bro.

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rogue_shadow

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The_Zen_Boy

Ayo good novel but is it dropped ? . . . . . [img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp]

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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Gd_Sys

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Hsaet_Uchiha

tooooo strong. At the age of 9, he can kill the 3rd raikage. And it only has till 3rd ninja war.

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Bryson_Webb

This was an amazing awesome read, I really really liked it. Oh and Please Keep On Making More Chapters. Bbbhhbhyy ffgvvbhyhhhhggggvgggggggggyggggygvvfrthgfrggjyggh

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