/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Fanfic a clever Naruto
摘要
You know, another Naruto-fanfic with the standard setting with the Kyuubi attack on Konoha, MC get reincarnated as Naruto, makes some tweaks here and there within the shadows.
English is not my first language, so bear with the grammer mistakes.
im gonna try some consistency when uploading, probably once a week.
i do not own the Naruto series all of it goes to Masashi Kishimoto, and i use stuff form other fanfic's to so i don't claim it as mine
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if mc was clever he wouldn't have wished to be reborn in a useless world like naruto. i don't even need to start reading this lol.. let me guess he gets sharingan? lol useless trash. i'm just going back to the good dxd harem fanfics now. see ya.
I had to drop in the second chapter. The writing is pretty bad. It has no character development. Everything feels rushed. There is a lot more to say but my brain isn't working today. 😐
Not bad story but MC not smart enough, storyline too much skip.anyway thank you.
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It's just trash....................................Don't mind me I am just filling the word count................................................................................................................................................and there you go a funny meme
"It's a boy Kushina" Nurse 1 "And it's healthy" Nurse 2 "Thank God it's Ok" Minato Namikaze "Can i see him" Kushina Uzumaki "Yes" Nurse 1 "His name is gonna be Naruto" Minato og Kushina You know what happens, Kyuubi gets out and gets controlled by an Uchiha, destroys some of the village, Minato and Kushina dies to protect Naruto aka Black Death, Hiruzen becomes Hokage again and so on. About a year after the kyuubi attack it's more impressive to is it op front than in the manga and anime - Naruto "Rrrrrr" Kyuubi "Yo kid what are you doing here?" Kyuubi "no mucth" Naruto when he came back he had long noticed both the ANBU and ROOT agents. More interraction with the Kyuubi happen later down the line but it's pretty much the same. A hidden underground complex by Konoha "Do you have the bodies" unknown voice 1 (What a trash, do you want us to read this?)