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Naruto: Blacksmith

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作者: theusual

4.13 (19 評分)

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Being born into a damned world where ninjas and aliens fight.

Not being born into a clan, having no talent, no money….nothing.

Just an Accessory Forge system….

FUCK!

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4.13

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DaoistcaqwL5

(it's Early review) MC:You good protogonist who had common sense and does not act arrogantly with no reason. Also he is value hardwork and don't let the power given to the system get into his head. Side characters:the story haven't gone that far, so i have nothing say. world:nothing too different and author haven't got time to expand its own unique lore. writing:Pretty standard writing in webnovel, so good to read pace:relatively normal pace his power/system:A bit too overtuned since he got a significant power boost in last chapters which i expected him to get in like 30-40 chapters as making your super strong is usually the most predictable outcome. But yeah, I am fine if author handle the MC well, like, revival of the uchiha:starting with a harem, F2P uchija and Part time employee, Tobirama jinchuriki fanfic(I don't remember it's name). review:Worthwhile for read and give power stone.

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Humbuub

The MC is pretty good. But the title is such a clickbait. Basically system does everything.

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avramelo

I like the concept. I'm such a person that if I don't see more than 4.3 stars, I don't even open a novel. But then I opened it for a reason. I like it.

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CosmicStardust25

Should have been reincarnated earlier in the timeline during the 2th shinobi world war or something, would have allowed the MC to stand higher and have more time to grow more powerfull.

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ace1440

I really liked this story until the mc said he would deliberately fail the academy after he preformed the best for the whole year. That really killed this story for me i hate when mcs hide there power to this degree.

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theusual

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Lizrock

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veldora_Tempest

A really good read just a little put off with the authors bias with itachi I stated that itachi massacring is clan killing mother's unborn babies and children was the most logical decision for the Uchiha clan , this is something something really delusional and itachi simp would say , pls if my words isn't convincing pls check chapter 18 But still a good read also the mc is getting too op it's Best u stop the system ( example system went on a cool down or have destabilize since it had build kuro's foundation up ) now because if u try to nerf the mc some u can prolong the novel you will lose your readers trust me on this Keep up the good work🤠💪🏾

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MidNutLearning

Still early but good concept

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Leirbagfcb

Everything is amazing, but the op Mc always make me weird, like he is 5 and is this strong. I wont give spoiler. Bebidas this, the ff is amazing, very well made and have a great world construction. The dialogues are amazingly realistic and the author is very consistent. Anyway. I love it. Thanks author. I will follow this jorney

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AnubisAkiraDFenrir

our OC is becoming powerful too quickly, but overall the idea is quite interesting, there is potential for a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the continuation

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DaoistIY3lzN

👍👍😁😄⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😏😏😏😏😏😏😁😁😁😁😄😄🤔⭐✨🌟⭐🌟✨💫⭐💥💥💥💥🌞 ..........................,......................................................

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Madhurya_Porush

i really liked some scenes i don't know why they were simple but I like the i first interaction with hinata

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azzkiba
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it started out good with mc gaining abilities/items just by some hair or precious things, but later become too complacent about his powers and does not even bother hiding it efficiently. Itachi even gets to know some of his powers and just for sake of the plot, he puts his faith with mc who has powers he shouldn't have and mc continues to be reckless and stupid.

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ReMormo

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Lizrock

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sun_moon

Please don’t drop

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Zeroz7

La historia esta bastante buena y la escritura también es decente, lo unico que puedo decir negativamente es que deberían cambiar el título y por ende algunas frases en la novela, ya que lo considero engañoso y sería lo único que me decepcionó. Cuál sistema de forja? Es claramente un sistema de extraccion

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Yugetio

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