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摘要
{Being Edited but slowly when I have free time}
Travel through the world of Naruto and become a member of the Uchiha clan.
Only three months are left until Uchiha Clan genocide with the hands of Itachi, planned by konoha's high level officials.
Just when Kenya was desperately finding a way to live, a voice rang out in his mind.
[ The Template Character:- Aizen Sōsuke has been awakened ]
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The story overall is good. The only downside is the writing. It is a translation but there are so many wierd spelling errors that disrupts the reading flow and sometimes you need to reread the sentence but still don't understand it. There are also chinese names in the fanfic, you should read the chapter for spelling errors and wierd sentences so us readers don't need to be tortured by it. But overall the story is good.
Aïe, aïe. It's seem that I'm not the only author who have bad comments. I know how it's difficult to write. You've all of my support author. The story is nice. Continuous like that 👌
okay, Author this the third time I added this fic again. and you still didn't fix some things. the details bruh, what kind of kido casting is this" the fourth of hado, pale lightning" you should do it normally like "hado number four, pale lightning" it rolls of the tongue nicely specially since in kido pronunciation is very important. and one wrong pronunciation can cause the spell to explode midway or to miss the target. and please just use a simple one word activation command for kyoka suigetsu jaust say shatter is enough.
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the writing quality is very bad, but a little better than most MTL novels. thats probably my biggest complaint, other than that its the fact that he changes identities and goes more into politics and boring things. i was kinda hoping for a missing nin perspective but he just goes to another village
Grammar.... pronouns.... lastly, story building.... all lack proper construction. You also neglected to remove several eastern references, "sayings," to give the book more traction away from a translation format.
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I think this is a pretty interesting story, it's very rare to see an MC who is not close to the original MC from the world itself, because what I often see is only an MC who always sticks to the MC
Good translation keep up the good work😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻
where i can read mtl i want to translate one dont worry i will try my best to not make it cringe lol 😆🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄🦄
Writing Quality 3/5: This is an MTL with some human editing, so I'll give it a 3/5. - Stability of Updates 3/5: You know why. - Story Development 4/5: The path the MC took is different from normal, so I'll give this a 4/5 for now. - Character Design 3/5: MC is alright. - World Background 3/5: The Naruto world-building and lore is rather average to be honest. I hope you expand the lore and stuff. - Overall is 3.2/5.
Muy buena historia gracias por traducirla, siempre puedes cambiar las expresiones si tú mismo no las entiendes y si por ejemplo dice porque las rosas son tan rojas podrías cambiarlo, vamos a ver el color de su sangre o su cuerpo lo teñire de rojo (pero si quieres si no dejalo así) gracias por la traducción.
so far it's is quite good hope the author keep it up........................................................................................
A pretty good story but the translator going from good translation to horrible translation and back again completely breaks immersion
Very nice fanfic I enjoy it very much!+ !!!!!!!!!!!😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
The storty is nice and the progress is okay as well, however the translation is really really bad. It's almost like a person who doesn't know neither english nor chinese decided to translate it.
I like the story ,and how the Ma is doing thing.It can be my favor nove for a long time.
keep going .................................................................................................................................
where there is Aizen I am there, because I want to know what author will do with such a charater. .. .😂hahahahahahahahahahaahahaahahahahahahahaah