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A lost clan on the brink of destruction due to greed for power. How many people actually know the truth about how the shinobi world came to be? how many people know about how their country was built on lies and betrayal?Hoshi, a boy Reincarnated into a clan that is almost extinct due to betrayal for their own kindness watch as he gets revenge on those that helped with the destruction of his clan in a new type of naruto where "beings" existing from other worlds are involved and everything that you once thought you knew about Naruto World changes.
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Im looking forward to how this can turn out, the star rating is from what i can see so far but i think i has potential. Good luck..........................
Nicely scripted, amazing work of literature, character Presentation Apt, wonderful and Action packed, thrilling and Suspense filled... Thumbs up
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Little misspelling but itger than that this book is golden. Definitely needs more chapters to fulfill my daily withdrawals. I also like how you are going all out even with explaining his blood lineage.
Excellent writing! Very creative lead into the plot. I am so looking forward to your character development and world building. Thank you for braving the fans that dislike canon divergence. Personally, I sometimes think people forget the word "fiction" in fan fiction. Anyway, your creativity and writing style has captured my interest and I look forward to your updates!
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