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A demigod with a bloodline that transcends back into ancient times. With power that was thought to be lost to time. His strength unrivaled. He witnesses the horrors of the world and fights against them. He is Atem, the son of {You need to read to find out}
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I like this book. I know the stars art really that high, but let me explain why I put it like that. 1): Writing Quality is a 3, because as you said when deciding to choose between writing only one book for now or not, you still have much to learn and improve on for your other books and ideas. 2): Updating Stability is a 4, because you have been updating every day which is nice and you are open to release more than one chapter a day. 3): Story Development is a 3, because the story is currently in book 3 of Percy jackson and I’m waiting to see how the story progresses, and the MC doesn’t know who his father is yet(which I’m suspecting is Typhon, The Father of Monsters). 4): Character Design is a 3, because there is still more drama that creates character development and there still book 4 with the Roman’s to add more character development to the MC. 5): World Background is a 4, because you are following the books in the fact of the events of the main story, but also adding your own flavor to the actual story like for example, instead of just the manticore to go after the children of hades, he also had a wyvern with him.
this a good book, but I'd wish for a bit more frequent updates, and you did a good job not revealing the parentage, but you should leave clues of it, other than that it is a fantastic book
my good sir, if you want a review, you shall have it this an amazing book with great mc and story building
pretty good pjo fanfic, I'm excited to see what other kind of powers he got from his 'godly' parent....................................................
really great book. my only "negative" point IS that the author IS a unexperienced (as seen in the First few, non rewritten Chapters), tho He steadily improves and, from what i have seen, IS Open to critique. the Chapters are Sometimes a Bit all over the place and there are a few inconsistencies with the Story. over all IT IS definetly a great book with pretty original ideas and i will become an Avid Reader for sure
Why ?? Why ?? Did you end it like this ?!? What is the next chapter ?? What happens to Bianca?? What is the next plan ??
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