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摘要
A man dies and gets reborn as the Greek god of war.
Sorry I'm not really good with summaries.
This is my first fanfiction so please be nice!
This in an AU. Most if not all persons named will not have the same character as they do in myths, though I will try to keep them as close as possible.
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寫檢討
Writing good but no point in him having meta knowledge. He never uses it and when he does it is to change a tiny-tiny-tiny-tiny part of mythology because he feels bad. He is also somehow not in control of his feelings at all and acts like the original ares from mythology and just drops his original personality. Also talks about being strong but never actually gets stronger properly just messes around and let’s his divinity control him and his emotions. 🤦♂️
The writing quality is better than most fanfiction present on webnovel. The author doesn't know much about the mythology or ares in general. This has potential but the author needs to do more research and a question for the author is this marvel, percy jackson or any other universe?