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摘要
This story is about a man named Putra Indra Santoso who reincarnated as Huo Yuhao. Witness his journey in Douluo Dalu's universe where he discovered and fulfilled his ultimate goals.
My Grammar is not the best, but hope you guys like it.
(An: I don't own anything besides my OC)
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寫檢討I havent found much of Douluo Dalu 2 fanfic. it doesn't get enough attention as other because the last part of the story is butchered mercilessly. i hope you give us fresh and entertaining story that's better than the original. And the chapters so far have been very nice to read.
i hope you back for good i enjoyed your work i was wandering if you ever gonna make a "Katekyo hitman reborn" fanfiction i hope you do cause i love your writing and "Katekyo hitman reborn" is my favorite story
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Sería Interesante si le das protagonista el legado del dios dragón o la reencarnación del dios dragón o la línea de sangre del dios dragón????????
well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
this is much better than the previous one, keep it up author by the way tries to slow down the advance of strength of the MC in the previous one this was very exaggerated and ruined the story a lot, also you can be patient in delivering things to your mother
The rewrite version has been better so far. I haven't noticed any problem and enjoyed it so much. Thanks for another wonderful fanfic, Nineclouds! You're one of the best!
I love reading doluo dalu but like they need to fkin focus on one story at a time like fr. Doluo dalu 1 isn’t even finished yet and theres already like doluo dalu 2,3,4,5 each with dozens to hundreds of chapters. They need to chill tf out. Anyways I love doluo dalu 1 and 2
I was thinking of giving this novel a 4* but after chapter 10 you won all 5, ........now give us what we want, you know what it is. ps: I would like to ask you not to make the mc very dense in things related to romance it becomes heavy to read.
Solo tengo elogios para este fin jajaja No he leído muchas fic's sobre DD2 pero de los que si, este está entre los dos mejores... Eres grande
beginning of the fanfictions I did not like the mission that forces the mc to perform a task in another world when he has not finished gives the impression that he is being manipulated, so I passed if not strongly that he kills tang san
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whatever you do please don't stop this fanfiction it's extremely interesting to read and looking forward to reading to the ending. You're an awesome author 🙂🙂🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Kenapa gambar nya Si Beban? Hmm~ menarik, setidak nya jika ingin menggabungkan kedua dunia, tarik The End di sisi mu di saat genting Pembantaian sepihak (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
thanks for bringing back the story please do not do like the last time since these stories of douluo dalu 2 there are not many and being a very good one I hope it arrives as a heavy ruler, there is not much to see or classify except the writing and the updates that are followed and the writing is easy to read and understand what the author is trying to express
Thank you for rewriting this book. it's a literal upgrade of the previous one, not only in pacing but also story wise. i hope you didn't hit us with Hiatus again :(
lets goo .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. *the name in the synopsis is oddly specific
作者 Nine_Clouds
Well.... the start was good. the grammar is good, the wincêst is good and there is scathach too. MC basically has a cheat system that grants him gacha tickets from ALL over the OMNIVERSE. THis is based on Doulou Dalu 2... until here is good, but then mc thanks to the cheat system, gets sooooooo many skills and abilities that's its takes more brain to understand his huge status windows than to read the chapter. MC reincarnates at 6. and as of chapter 42, he is 10 and has a literal empire in a NEW Continnent that's only 1600 km away (LOL). Has almost a dozen level 90 subordinates, a cult over 50.000 members of 100% girls under his name. Has 3 martial spirits with 2 of them being already a cheat on their own.... So yeah... its kinda boring read chapters that 30% are powerups.