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De mis favoritas vale realmente la pena me gusto de principio a fin Lo recomiendo mucho :) ........................................................................................ Lo lei hasta el 380 espero más capítulos muy recomendado
Thank you for the story i enjoy it, It is just me but i think the yandere are not yandere enough
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well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
good, but the author made Dalu's douluo strength level, even though I think the douluo strength level is low
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Hey author, was wondering if I could borrow that SYSTEM idea of yours? Really great btw:) Hoping to use it in my fic. Just letting you know:))
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it's a great fanfic, nice to pass time,,,,,,,,, but after returning from dxd it felt strangely boring like his interaction with those shrek kids, cause he is a very powerful and i dislike the tag hiding your true strength. Also miss the upgrading ticket.
This novel is awesome, but the only problem is, the woman, because this author seems to have a certain issue. Pain is not a sensation one can derive pleasure from, particularly when it pertains to women, as they typically do not derive any enjoyment from it. The fact that all the female characters in his novel exhibit a masochistic disposition is rather illogical. It would be more coherent if they were all inclined towards sadism rather than masochism.
I think you should change the cover of the novel yelan is good but I already have her as a character in game ,those who know her will lose their interest after seeing that photo because everyone wants something new bro cheer up and change it to something that looks beautiful and much sexier
Bikin Ngakak namanya wkwk ..........................................,.......................................................................................
I expected it to be a fierce action and light harem novel until chapter 69 and some "Broken Mind" chapters trully shocked me☠️ Although I don really have a problem, please reduce the hardcore😅
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The H as well as a new born babies are you to go to church and fresh, e text you raised me know if I can be all of our own levels and it was walking around the lord always be there in the wilderness of god and wind to the lord always been a while since I've seen you raise m manga goblin
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this is the one of the best fanfic i have ever read this is just to awesome the story development is very good and character development is way better the mc is overpowered but do some mistakes here there but correct it later he's has his fair share of past Life experience but even tough he does some mistakes and we'll story development is like best i heva ever read
It's an interesting story as mixture of hardworking and overpowered character with system. I like this story as it has good background and story development and it's character is also good has intelligence but a little naive. Totally it's a good story. It's just characters never showed their all out powers and some scenes like that where character don't use all his power and villain have more time than needed.
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De mis favoritas vale realmente la pena me gusto de principio a fin Lo recomiendo mucho :) ........................................................................................ Lo lei hasta el 380 espero más capítulos muy recomendado
Thank you for the story i enjoy it, It is just me but i think the yandere are not yandere enough
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well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
good, but the author made Dalu's douluo strength level, even though I think the douluo strength level is low
Интересный фанфик с полный чудесный системы удач, жду драка бога тана сана.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Hey author, was wondering if I could borrow that SYSTEM idea of yours? Really great btw:) Hoping to use it in my fic. Just letting you know:))
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Putra XD ajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja
like this.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a great fanfic, nice to pass time,,,,,,,,, but after returning from dxd it felt strangely boring like his interaction with those shrek kids, cause he is a very powerful and i dislike the tag hiding your true strength. Also miss the upgrading ticket.
This novel is awesome, but the only problem is, the woman, because this author seems to have a certain issue. Pain is not a sensation one can derive pleasure from, particularly when it pertains to women, as they typically do not derive any enjoyment from it. The fact that all the female characters in his novel exhibit a masochistic disposition is rather illogical. It would be more coherent if they were all inclined towards sadism rather than masochism.
I think you should change the cover of the novel yelan is good but I already have her as a character in game ,those who know her will lose their interest after seeing that photo because everyone wants something new bro cheer up and change it to something that looks beautiful and much sexier
Bikin Ngakak namanya wkwk ..........................................,.......................................................................................
I expected it to be a fierce action and light harem novel until chapter 69 and some "Broken Mind" chapters trully shocked me☠️ Although I don really have a problem, please reduce the hardcore😅
揭示劇透 The H as well as a new born babies are you to go to church and fresh, e text you raised me know if I can be all of our own levels and it was walking around the lord always be there in the wilderness of god and wind to the lord always been a while since I've seen you raise m manga goblin
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this is the one of the best fanfic i have ever read this is just to awesome the story development is very good and character development is way better the mc is overpowered but do some mistakes here there but correct it later he's has his fair share of past Life experience but even tough he does some mistakes and we'll story development is like best i heva ever read
It's an interesting story as mixture of hardworking and overpowered character with system. I like this story as it has good background and story development and it's character is also good has intelligence but a little naive. Totally it's a good story. It's just characters never showed their all out powers and some scenes like that where character don't use all his power and villain have more time than needed.
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