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An ancient virus was released upon the world and from then on nothing was the same...
Zombies, mutant wild animals and people with mutant powers...
Jiang Liushi, one day woke up and found the Starseed, in his mind, a Black Technology which could assist him in various ways.
Its most important function? Mechanical refiting and upgrading.
It is my version of My MCV and Doomsday. I didn't like how the Starseed worked in the original, nor did I like the original MC and his lack of progress with any of the girls riding his pimped minibus.
Writing it for fun, so don't expect high quality work.
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It's an alright story however I have some problems with it that I can't stand tbh First, I get its a harem novel but will it kill someone to acc make them useful instead of just sitting around while the mc does everything ? It's like he will just go around making a little collection... Also, what is with everyone's fcking hero bs. If you were trying to survive in that world why would you enter the nest of hundreds of mutant beasts for a girl you met once. WHILE YOU HAVE YOUR OWN SISTER TO LOOK FOR. I don't mind him helping people LATER ON when he acc has his priorities straight and has the skills to back It up. Say he is good with weapons, hand to hand etc Literally the first thing he says to the girl is that they can only stay for a day as to not get overrun and that he still has to get his sister so he cannot be stuck/die there. Next couple of chaps ? Heads straight into the fcking nest... Really want to read a proper story of what someone would do, make it realistic ffs (I get he has a superpower but you know what I mean) Finally, it's just my preference but why tf is the girl calling him brother etc ? Is it their culture ? cause from where I am calling a girl who you have an interest for sister and her calling you brother is weird af. Like, imagine your gf calling you brother...
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be read them thank you 🙏🙏🙏
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i dont like this **** who cares if this is original or not but this is still a trash . his cheat is not explained at all so all he do is just modify some useless trash vehicles and he didnt even try to explore this starfeild thing maybe there are other use of that thing
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
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Honestly enjoyed it quite a lot. Haven’t read the original story this fanfic is based on in a long time and even then I quickly grew annoyed and stopped reading it at some point. However I found myself pretty entertained by the base building elements pretty quickly in this story. The romance also is developing nicely despite their struggles to adapt to their new surroundings. There’s not too many chapters and updates are slow coming but the quality of those chapters are pretty top notch. Only small typos at most. Good character development later on and the girls all seem to have unique personalities rather than carboard cut outs of damsels in distress. So far there are three girls who are interested in him, none of those girls are baggage as they are determined not to be ‘useless’ to him. Overall a solid 8/10 if not higher, with it only being hindered by the lack of persistent updates and low quantity of chapters. Was honestly sad to get to the end. Hope to see more in the future. + world building + romance (harem) + base building + character development - low amount of chapters - slow updates
I read more then 30 chapters of this novel and to be honest...the original author was not so bright..this version writer is thick as a log. the author mentioned he didn't like the mc and the way he treated girls in the original version. to be honest this version's mc does the same.. nothing changed there atleast until the 24 chapter where I dropped this. the storyline is more boring then the oh version. this novel should be called "the doomsday vehicle of the abstinence and mentally challenged hero"
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this book is better than the original, it's very pleasant to read and the mc is smart enough too by realistic. keep up the good work, I enjoy the story
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this fanfiction is very good ...................................................................................................................................................................................
I liked the pace of the main character and the different story line. Keep up the good work on your novel. If there was anything negative to say it would be not enough updates on the chapters.
I totally agree with this guy. Thank you for doing this. I like the original concept of the story, but I don’t like the development of the characters. So this is a good bet! I look forward for this progression!!!