/ Anime & Comics / My Hero Academia: Tropic Thunder
摘要
Denki Kaminari is no more, in this verse, he's a exchange student from South America. A complete overhaul (:D) of the character in my mind. Artistic liberties in regards of individual abilities will seem familiar, as I will take inspiration - if not a complete rip-off - of other lightning users of other animes.
My first ever fic, try not to die from cringe.
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I was really looking forward to reading this, but instead, I got disappointed at the lack of structure, and the grammar was okay, but it could definitely be better, along with having no clue what was going on besides someone's sister dieing because of a bolt of lightning? There was no background to the story or character description.
揭示劇透
Jesus Christ, too much drama in just two chapters. how can I read this if all the mc thoughts are so freaking depressing?!