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I was really looking forward to reading this, but instead, I got disappointed at the lack of structure, and the grammar was okay, but it could definitely be better, along with having no clue what was going on besides someone's sister dieing because of a bolt of lightning? There was no background to the story or character description.
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Jesus Christ, too much drama in just two chapters. how can I read this if all the mc thoughts are so freaking depressing?!
I was really looking forward to reading this, but instead, I got disappointed at the lack of structure, and the grammar was okay, but it could definitely be better, along with having no clue what was going on besides someone's sister dieing because of a bolt of lightning? There was no background to the story or character description.
揭示劇透 Jesus Christ, too much drama in just two chapters. how can I read this if all the mc thoughts are so freaking depressing?!
I enjoy it a lot, it’s good enough by itself.