/ Anime & Comics / Multiverse Hopping
摘要
Disclaimer All copyrighted content is the property of its respective owner(s)
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
32評論
4.14
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
honest? you should study english and rewrite this whole cancer to the eyes. insaw that almost 70% (about 30) of the reviews are from the SAME dude giving 5 stars and full of emoticons and all others would be on average 2 stars.
Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sinceramente ? Ótima idéia, execução horrível. Gramática horrível, mc horrível, estúpido. Pq diabos ele conta q é um reencarnado ? Pq ele se preocupa com oq vai acontecer no mundo se ele, com 7 anos, já é forte pra porra ? N tem sentido nenhum. Ele com logia n pode ser danificado sem haki e ngm nesse mundo usa haki. Não tem lógica e foi mt mal executado.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I saw a 5 star novel and thought that this must be amazing if so many people liked it but no the MC is mentally unstable......................
reading this story is a pain, mc told esdeath that he is a fake animation character and mc has reincarnated he knows the whole story is he has supernatural powers and she quietly accepted, really ??? she told a person that she is not real and she accepts it and believes it?. the personalities of the characters are different from the original and mc goes around to be the messiah not killing but only saving girls and nobody says anything about how he knows everything and everyone believes him. not only he is very strong and he still cares about the problems he may have and he cannot be damaged in any way because he is a logical and has problems, nice concept but the execution was beyond horrible
揭示劇透
(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~
揭示劇透
It's pretty Great I really Love it... And Seiya use his Powers in Creative way like his [Devil Fruits] like using [Rumble Fruit] to Reprogram a Person, Taking their Masteries like Sword Masteries or Bow Masteries, and Reading their Memories... The Characters is good too because of Seiya intervening in their lives so they avoid Tragedies in their lives like Akame and Kurome or Erza and Kagura... I wish this Fanfic to Continue because it's really Great... Good Job Keep Up the Good Work... 💖💖💖💖💖
揭示劇透
.............................................................................................................................................
+18??? lemon??? ..........................................................................................................................................
yes so far quite entertaining because it gives 5 stars, just continue your work writer. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You obliviously don't know how to talk or write in any language. Just run on sentence after run on sentence. A paragraph is meant to be made out of several sentences not 1 sentence for each paragraph. Also some words aren't used right but that doesn't bother me to much. I made it about half way through chapter 1 and saw maybe 2 periods. Btw should rename story Devil FruitS User in the Multiverse. To many fruits.
Menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan menyebalkan
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
story is really good but grammar and sentence structure is killing me. still gonna read it but I hope that in future story will get proper editting