/ Games / MMORPG: Deep Dive
摘要
Lewis's life was over after an accident, both of his parents were killed and he was paralyzed and unable to walk for the rest of his life, but all that changed when the first full dive virtual reality game was released, MMORPG: Deep Dive.
A game like no other that operates inside the mind of the user without them moving a single limb. A game that promised wealth and power for all those who participate.
Lewis was given another chance in this new world as one of the beta testers, eager to stand up again even if not in the real world he accepted the offer without hesitation.
But fate had other plans for him.
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Author's note
This is my first novel so it's obviously not going to be perfect, but I'm going to perfect it to the best of my abilities.
English is not my first language so bear with me in case you spot any grammatic error.
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One of the best books I read that was written by a newbie author, the story development and character design are really good, the world building needs a little more work but the story is solid, keep it up.
This book is nothing short of five stars, the writing quality is top notch and the plot is solid, author should try and update more chapters.
Author review, of course I'm going to rate my book 5 stars not because I'm bias but because it's good, give it a try and when you are done leave a review.