/ Anime & Comics / MHA: Ryo
摘要
In a world where quirks define destinies, Ryo, a 15-year-old boy with galaxy-like eyes and extraordinary potential, is unexpectedly thrust into the spotlight when the world learns he is the son of All Might, the Symbol of Peace. With a tragic past marked by abuse and loneliness, Ryo discovers he possesses not one, but two powerful quirks—one that commands others and another that grants immense physical strength. As he navigates this new life under All Might’s care, Ryo struggles to understand his place in a world that is both fascinated and fearful of his potential. Amidst media frenzy, hero expectations, and his own insecurities, Ryo embarks on a journey to become not just a hero, but the greatest one the world has ever seen, all while learning the true meaning of family, love, and self-acceptance.
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Cool idea, poorly executed. Writing quality: Nothing to major, but definitely needs some proofreading or a gloss over by an A.I. Story Development: Lots of plot holes. You never bring up what went down with his parents. You also give out All Mights' names to the public. Overall, it's forced and needs work. Character design: Characters feel like NPCs. world background: Skipped a whole bunch of details that could have made the story more interesting. EX: his parents, or nezu's thought process on Ryo. Final review - Needs some work, I recommend you pause the story and rework the plot, progression, characters, and writing quality. 3/5
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Firstly a five star review... Now question that I have. 1.How does is quirk 'Final Obligation' works in people and objects.Is it a mental order or physical like telekinesis to make said person do is will. 2.How does is quirk 'Black Star'(or something like that) works is it just an physical enchantment that gives an aura or is an aura that can get a physical enchantment
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