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"Hmm. So, a normal person from our wold finds himself in the body of a boy who did not have a quirk in a certain world he knows. Oh, forgot to tell you, but he also has a watch that did not shows him time."
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God you can't write a single sentence right. Are you using a translator or is this you cause my God is it bad, the character isn't that compelling either he's more annoying than anything. Thanks for ruining another omnitrix story for me, it seems that no one can actually make a decent one except a handful of people.
This doesn't even deserve 1 star but I can't leave this review here without it so it's a sacrifice I'm willing to make. The story revolves around our loner mc which keeps saying his family hates him and is trash towards him but every single time they try to help him he acts like the most dramatic thing out there and treating his family like trash. So many cliche's and idiotic mc i would rather read poor translation stories. I don't know why almost everyone is rating this story with 5 stars when it clearly doesn't deserve it.
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One of the most dramatic, edgy , and stupid MC i ever saw in the Fucking world stupid author................n.n ....n. ..n. . n. ........ ...n..
This is horrible, straight up foul. The story is bad, there's no fixing it. the grammar kills me, there's nothing desirable about it. I love omnitrix stories and I was hoping for a new interest and all I got was disappointment. All I have to ask is why was this in trending for me?
GOOD. Great fan fiction, interesting gg, good character disclosure. Good luck and update the fanfic soon. how soon will the chapter be out?[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora)
the fan-fic is really good. mha and omnitrix is a good combi. i hope you write more and dont drop just tell us when more chapter come ps: the devil like it
I will not write a lot of sentences. I'll just say that this is good fanfiction and i enjoy it a lot. Author, please continue, you're doing great.
This is the third time that I’ve seen this ff have a rewrite so I am making this so readers know the author never makes it past chapter 50 before dropping and reuploading the chapters a few months later.
Really good please don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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it is a very good story i did not like the first few chapters but after he gets the omnitrix it gets much better [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i love this fan fic please man keep updating ignore all the f*****s who say its terrible they dont matter there are people like me who love this so take my stones and keep writing please
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best creative MHA fanfic out there🤩❤️i love it so much.hope you update more chapters.this is the first fanfic that involves both anime and cartoon which are my favourites.i wish i could send you stones to support your work❤️pls dont drop this novel like others pls. Ps for reader:this is the fanfic worth reading or you will regret❤️
Completely butchered the concept. MC is overtly dramatic, edgy and emo. much like Sasuke, but even worse, he doesn't use his brain in right matters, if he used his mind correctly, he could have easily lived without much drama. Author just wanted to create too much drama and edginess, really, even the grammar, writing style are bad. no world background given, just involved Ben 10 characters out of nowhere. a completely wasted Ben 10 story