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I read it completely, and honestly? I regret it, the MC's attitudes are not coherent or even follow a thin line of logic, Until the arc of the Ben 10 universe improved, and if he had stayed there the story might have been saved, but that's it, he goes back to his world and returns to being the same stupid person. I was looking for a story about the Ben 10 universe, out of pure nostalgia, but I didn't like it and apparently everyone hated the way it was executed, the idea is good, but that's it...🤷🏾♂️
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I like this story. One of the best ben 10 fics I've read. I don't know why so many people are giving it a 1 star. Can't wait for more.
I thinks it's a nice read not to serious and just is good to both of the lores
Overall i like this fanfic and the idea itself. But you could work on the grammar. Hope for more chapters.
Couldn't finish the first chapter due to how bad it is. I wouldn't recommend reading this at all. 1 star for everything.
in the early chapters like what the other said, the mc is so edgy but at least it improves in the later part and the story is good bro and if you can please continue the story cause it's interesting for me because i pretty much read all the MHA fanfics that's interesting and your fanfic is good for me cause that's a new idea in MHA.
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This is the third time that I’ve seen this ff have a rewrite so I am making this so readers know the author never makes it past chapter 50 before dropping and reuploading the chapters a few months later.
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MC is overtly dramatic, edgy and emo. much like Sasuke, but even worse, he doesn't use his brain in right matters, if he used his mind correctly, he could have easily lived without much drama.
best creative MHA fanfic out there🤩❤️i love it so much.hope you update more chapters.this is the first fanfic that involves both anime and cartoon which are my favourites.i wish i could send you stones to support your work❤️pls dont drop this novel like others pls. Ps for reader:this is the fanfic worth reading or you will regret❤️
i remember when this was just a little fan fic but i had a gut feeling it would become popular so dear author take my stones and congrats on getting this novel on the power ranking
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
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very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora)
This is really good I hope you continue to make more .................................................................. ..............
pretty good so far, loved how he played it calm even with big sis in danger, would try to see how much he can change DH form, later on, suck as adding more spikes to the back or adding a small modification to his arms or internal structure in order to fire light rays back by tanking it instead of using hands just in case he ever needs to do it when his arms are pre occupied, also make sure he takes any crystals he makes with him back since never want bad guys to get info on his guys weaknesses or DNA
the fan-fic is really good. mha and omnitrix is a good combi. i hope you write more and dont drop just tell us when more chapter come ps: the devil like it
This is horrible, straight up foul. The story is bad, there's no fixing it. the grammar kills me, there's nothing desirable about it. I love omnitrix stories and I was hoping for a new interest and all I got was disappointment. All I have to ask is why was this in trending for me?
I will not write a lot of sentences. I'll just say that this is good fanfiction and i enjoy it a lot. Author, please continue, you're doing great.
it is a very good story i did not like the first few chapters but after he gets the omnitrix it gets much better [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I read it completely, and honestly? I regret it, the MC's attitudes are not coherent or even follow a thin line of logic, Until the arc of the Ben 10 universe improved, and if he had stayed there the story might have been saved, but that's it, he goes back to his world and returns to being the same stupid person. I was looking for a story about the Ben 10 universe, out of pure nostalgia, but I didn't like it and apparently everyone hated the way it was executed, the idea is good, but that's it...🤷🏾♂️
揭示劇透 I like this story. One of the best ben 10 fics I've read. I don't know why so many people are giving it a 1 star. Can't wait for more.
I thinks it's a nice read not to serious and just is good to both of the lores
Overall i like this fanfic and the idea itself. But you could work on the grammar. Hope for more chapters.
Couldn't finish the first chapter due to how bad it is. I wouldn't recommend reading this at all. 1 star for everything.
in the early chapters like what the other said, the mc is so edgy but at least it improves in the later part and the story is good bro and if you can please continue the story cause it's interesting for me because i pretty much read all the MHA fanfics that's interesting and your fanfic is good for me cause that's a new idea in MHA.
Complete and utter garbage. ............. .... .......... . ..................... ...... ................................................
This is the third time that I’ve seen this ff have a rewrite so I am making this so readers know the author never makes it past chapter 50 before dropping and reuploading the chapters a few months later.
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Really good please don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su leal lector está aquí para ayudar a su lector leal está aquí para ayudar
MC is overtly dramatic, edgy and emo. much like Sasuke, but even worse, he doesn't use his brain in right matters, if he used his mind correctly, he could have easily lived without much drama.
best creative MHA fanfic out there🤩❤️i love it so much.hope you update more chapters.this is the first fanfic that involves both anime and cartoon which are my favourites.i wish i could send you stones to support your work❤️pls dont drop this novel like others pls. Ps for reader:this is the fanfic worth reading or you will regret❤️
i remember when this was just a little fan fic but i had a gut feeling it would become popular so dear author take my stones and congrats on getting this novel on the power ranking
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
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Really good please don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora)
This is really good I hope you continue to make more .................................................................. ..............
pretty good so far, loved how he played it calm even with big sis in danger, would try to see how much he can change DH form, later on, suck as adding more spikes to the back or adding a small modification to his arms or internal structure in order to fire light rays back by tanking it instead of using hands just in case he ever needs to do it when his arms are pre occupied, also make sure he takes any crystals he makes with him back since never want bad guys to get info on his guys weaknesses or DNA
the fan-fic is really good. mha and omnitrix is a good combi. i hope you write more and dont drop just tell us when more chapter come ps: the devil like it
This is horrible, straight up foul. The story is bad, there's no fixing it. the grammar kills me, there's nothing desirable about it. I love omnitrix stories and I was hoping for a new interest and all I got was disappointment. All I have to ask is why was this in trending for me?
I will not write a lot of sentences. I'll just say that this is good fanfiction and i enjoy it a lot. Author, please continue, you're doing great.
it is a very good story i did not like the first few chapters but after he gets the omnitrix it gets much better [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really love this story so please keep it up.!