/ Anime & Comics / Meliodas In TBATE
摘要
Aiden, an 18 years old boy, living alone in this cruel and harsh world ends up meeting the legendary Truck-kun and die in his hands.
Meeting god, he gives him a new chance to live in the world of The Beginning After the End, a magical world filled with adventures and mysteries in the body of Meliodas the Dragon Sin of Wrath from the Seven Deadly Sins acquiring all of his powers and abilities.
Follow the story of our Mc in this new world where new people exist and original events happen, and watch how he is going to change the world by his intervention.
[NOTE] I do not own any of the characters or the plot in this book, only the original characters and events are mine.
[DISCLAIMER] THERE IS GOING TO BE +18 SCENES IN THIS BOOK SO PLEASE IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 YEARS OLD DO NOT READ THIS BOOK!
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If you had read the original novel then there is no need to read this. Just add MC and Elizabeth to the story as twins to the original novel MC and heroin. The story is same as original Beginning after the end with some extra chareters.
Meliodas in TBATE presents a promising premise by bringing Meliodas, an iconic character, into the world of TBATE. However, despite the potential of this combination, the fanfic fails to fully leverage the opportunity to create a fresh and original narrative. One of the most evident issues is the author’s over-reliance on the original plot of TBATE. Instead of reimagining the world of TBATE with the inclusion of Meliodas, the story follows the events of the original novel almost to the letter, with few significant changes. This lack of originality and creativity makes the story feel like a simple "copy and paste" with the superficial addition of Meliodas and a few secondary characters. While the inclusion of Meliodas is theoretically interesting, it does not integrate organically into the TBATE plot. His presence often feels forced and does not add much to the story’s development. The secondary characters introduced also lack depth and seem to exist solely to justify Meliodas’ inclusion, without truly enriching the narrative. The lack of innovation is especially disappointing given the potential for a well-executed crossover. The interaction between Meliodas and the TBATE characters could have provided unique opportunities to explore new dynamics and conflicts, but these possibilities are inadequately explored. Instead, the author opts to replicate scenes and situations from the original material, making the story feel repetitive and predictable. Additionally, the writing itself has issues. Although the action scenes are occasionally exciting, the overall narrative suffers from grammatical and stylistic errors that distract and hinder immersion in the story. A more careful review and rigorous editing could significantly improve the quality of the text. In summary, Meliodas in TBATE falls short of expectations for an innovative and thrilling crossover. The lack of originality and over-reliance on the TBATE plot make the story feel derivative and uninspired. While die-hard fans of both universes might find some value in seeing their favorite characters interact, the story as a whole fails to offer a fresh and engaging narrative. A thorough revision and a more creative approach are recommended to truly do justice to the crossover premise.
The modern day style of writing kinda throws off the immersion of the novel for me. Not bad but its also not good. Major problem im seeing is that author is using words like man in a modern way which should not be happening. Besides that its alright
this is the first fanfic of tbate I'll be reading so be grateful human your are the first hmmp!
The plot doesn't change much from the original story aside from a few OC's, but that's my cup of coffee.
No, I don't like Meliodas in the first place. Reading him in my favourite novel is outright no. But if only would you let me know if there is going to be a harem in the story, I may read it. Tell me, okay?
I like this novel, this novel has something different and i like it. I cant wait to see more chapter. Hope this novel not drop :) Can i get a Full Counter? SATE SATE SATE~~
If anyone comes to read this novel because they want to see MC collect a harem of cute girls in the original story, this story will disappoint you because MC throws all those girls to other people. Even though MC is the one who saved them, they fell in love with someone else for no reason, which is very disappointing. MC slowly progresses the story along with Arthur, with the results not much different from the original, just the ending of each event is slightly better, but at least he chooses to kill Lucas.
Bro, fan fiction has good potential, but I've read 24 chapters and haven't seen much of yours. I am one of those who have read the novel not only by manhwa, and I seem to be rereading it again, but with the participation of Meliodas and Elizabeth, I understand that the author is a beginner and, to be honest, to invent his own and write, roughly speaking, "laziness", but a little of his own stories and at least some influence on the plot it doesn't hurt from Meliodas, as I said, it's like I'm rereading a novel and thanks to this I know everything in advance, it's predictable, and I'm not talking about mistakes in writing yet, no offense to the author, but he better know what's wrong with fan fiction so that in the future It was easier and better for him to write. Bye bye
Ain't no way this novel only has 5 star reviews, it doesn't deserve it, author probably deletes the negative reviews. The spelling of the author is absolutely trash, a Chinese Author can do better bro I'm sick of seeing "existence" or other spelling mistakes, besides that. The grammar ain't grammaring😭🙏
My first time reviewing but I have to say that this novel has done well to cure my Boredom and make my life just a little better.
I like the idea of this Fanfic but I remember reading it briefly. I have a question will he actually grow up or be stuck in his child form like the original Meliodas?
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